Your Critique
My first reaction is... where's the map capsule? When you're talking about a geographical location, a map capsule is virtually REQUIRED, esp. in modern age when geography ain't one of our strong suits.
Photos are quite good.
I noticed you did not group the tourism hubs.
You should also create a "meta hub", which should be titled "Tourism in Croatia" or something like that, and then links to each of your tourism hubs. In the meta hub, explain what Croatia is like, give a little history, why people should visit compared to other places in Europe, and so on. Even a proposed itinerary for a 3-7 day trip is a possibility.
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