Your Critique
My first reaction is... where's the map capsule? When you're talking about a geographical location, a map capsule is virtually REQUIRED, esp. in modern age when geography ain't one of our strong suits.
Photos are quite good.
I noticed you did not group the tourism hubs.
You should also create a "meta hub", which should be titled "Tourism in Croatia" or something like that, and then links to each of your tourism hubs. In the meta hub, explain what Croatia is like, give a little history, why people should visit compared to other places in Europe, and so on. Even a proposed itinerary for a 3-7 day trip is a possibility.
Related Discussions
- 8
Why do Hub writers not appreciate literary critique to improve their craft?
Why do Hub writers not appreciate literary critique to improve their craft?I wrote a suggestion in the forum yesterday about adding the ability to include MINOR feedback to authors while rating articles in the Hub Hopper. I know peeps can get rude with critiques - but I think that can be minimized....
- 42
Please critique some of my hubs.
Ok, here goes. I rarely get involved in the forums, I guess I am a little on the shy side. I have been here almost 2 years now and have published over 80 hubs. I have only had 2 ever unfeatured and have deleted those and a couple more that I thought just were not up to par. My...
- 7
Okay-ready for critique
Hi all-I now have three slightly different sets of hubs. I have edited them several times. I have also worked with titles and keywords on each. I want to make the highest quality marketing-style hubs I can. (I would also like to see if I can get accepted int he ebay affiliate...
- 18
Critique Please
http://hubpages.com/hub/How-To-Refurbis … s-AquariumMost of my hubs start at 50 then go up from there, but this one instantly started at 49 and has gone down to 44. I'm still new to Hubpages, though I've learned a lot so far, but this stumps me altogether.
- 20
Critique my writing?
Hi, I'm new here, and, well... a fairly young, inexperienced and new writer. With some encouragement from Shadesbreath, I started writing and churned out four mediocre hubs and I'm not sure where to go from there. They're written in the same style, and I'm not sure how to approach a serious topic...
- 8
Constructive Critique
Hello there,I am very new in blogging. I started two weeks ago and I would like to know how I am doing (right or wrong) Any helping critique is welcome. Please don't take on my your bad day... just kidding.Thank you,Cheers,