Advice and constructive criticism needed please

  1. Rosemay50 profile image80
    Rosemay50posted 6 years ago

    I have published my first ever story that I have written.
    Before I decide whether to attempt more I would love some advice on how to improve my writing. Constructive criticism will be most welcome. Don't mention the title, I know that one is atrocious.
    Thank you

    http://rosemay50.hubpages.com/hub/Horse … ging-Wives

    1. Camping with Kids profile image76
      Camping with Kidsposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      It was a good hub.  Criticism? - shoot the dog!

      GA

      1. Rosemay50 profile image80
        Rosemay50posted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Thank you for taking a look for me. Shoot the dog... hehe.
        I wasn't sure if it was too short.

 
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