Would love constructive criticism on my latest hub.

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    TrinityCatposted 5 years ago

    Hey guys,

    I'm relatively new at Hubpages and I would really like to read your opinions on my latest hub. I think I did pretty good for a "beginner" but I know there can be improvement on a few details. But you be the judge, I'm asking for it (tongue):

    http://trinitycat.hubpages.com/hub/3-me … be-playing

    Also, I have encountered a few errors in my first hub (which I have fixed) but I would also love to read what you think about it and what can be improved:

    http://trinitycat.hubpages.com/hub/How- … in-College

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    Pearldiverposted 5 years ago

    Excellent writing... you have nailed the English language better than many who have it as their primary language.. Well done.. Great belief in your yourself.. what else can I say... You Are Good! smile

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      TrinityCatposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you! I must say, I'm flattered. big_smile