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New hub needs help

  1. Jojosi profile image60
    Jojosiposted 5 years ago

    I am 9 days old inside here and have written my first hub here: http://jojosi.hubpages.com/hub/growing-cucumbers. Looking for help! [not published yet]

    1. WorkAtHomeMums profile image83
      WorkAtHomeMumsposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I have tried to review your hub but it appears that it does not exist?

  2. Jojosi profile image60
    Jojosiposted 5 years ago

    Sorry, may be the link should have been written: http://www.jojosi.hubpages.com/growing-cucumbers

  3. Millionaire Tips profile image89
    Millionaire Tipsposted 5 years ago

    I found it! http://jojosi.hubpages.com/hub/growing-cucumbers
    It looks very nice.  Great information, nice chart, and good to add the video. Great that it covers the topic from the initial planting to the harvesting.

  4. Jojosi profile image60
    Jojosiposted 5 years ago

    Thank you so much Millionaire Tips, thank you for the assurance. Its great!

  5. Be Pain Free profile image81
    Be Pain Freeposted 5 years ago

    -Fix capitalization in your first subheading
    -Remove commas from sentence "Cucumbers, belong to the gourd family, and are widely grown throughout many of the warm regions of the world" (superfluous)
    -"It is believed to be one of the widely cultivated vegetable after tomatoes, onions and cabbage" - could use a source, or simply make the assertion without "it is believed"
    -Fix singular on "Growing Cucumber" subheading
    -Separate paragraphs by an empty line break (they all run together as is)
    -"tell-tell" should be "telltale"
    -Fix repeated sentences under "Weed Control" and "Pests and Diseases" subheadings

    Great hub, just could use some spit and polish. Separating the paragraphs by an empty line break will do the most good.

    1. Jojosi profile image60
      Jojosiposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for taking the time to go through my hub and spotting all the mistakes.  That surely was a job well done.  You are a life saver!  I went back and have ironed the mistakes out (I hope).  I needed someone to do just that before I put out my next hub.  That surely helped.  Thank you!

 
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