Please Help Me With My Latest Hub

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  1. Maembe profile image62
    Maembeposted 13 years ago

    Hi all,
    I'm looking for help with my latest hub, inspired by hubpages forum posters.  Firstly, I wasn't really sure what to title it or what tags to use.  Secondly and most importantly, I'd like a critique of the content.  Is there more information you'd like to see, better organization, etc.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Why-Conspiracy- … er-Go-Away

    Thanks for your help!

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  2. Michael Willis profile image68
    Michael Willisposted 13 years ago

    I enjoyed reading the hub. There is one sentence you might look at though.
    "This is many Republicans watch Bill O'Reilly and the readers of the HuffingtonPost are almost exclusively Liberal.

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    1. Maembe profile image62
      Maembeposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks, I added the "why" to fix it.  I swear I read that sentence at least five times before publishing.  It's amazing how many obvious mistakes when proofreading your own work.

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      1. Michael Willis profile image68
        Michael Willisposted 13 years agoin reply to this

        I have done the same thing over and over again.

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    Website Examinerposted 13 years ago

    Very interesting and clear. I do recommend that you do another round of proofreading. Here is what I found in the first half or so of the article - my suggestions in parenthesis:

    Capitalization: Youtube (YouTube)
    Past/present tense: seemed to be (seem to be)
    Grammar: reason... is due to the way (reason... is the manner in which...)
    Clarity:  makes them much easier (makes myths much easier)
    Grammar: the time day (the time of day)
    Punctuation: opponents and you (opponents, and you
    Punctuation: and instead, (and, instead,)

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    1. Maembe profile image62
      Maembeposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks.  I can't believe I missed a couple of those.

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