I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Best Toys for Girls and Boys with Disabilities

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   thebeckerlawfirmposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Best Toys for Girls and Boys with Disabilities (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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   Rupert Taylorposted 7 years ago

   That one is not going to fly here. HubPages is not the place to promote your own business and the powers that be take a dim view of attempts to do so.

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      thebeckerlawfirmposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      The intention was not to promote my business. So do you consider that it will be a good post if I remove the link?  This is the message that I received to revise the article: "This Hub does not meet HubPages' quality standards. Please improve the Hub first before republishing." It didn't mention the link, so I wasn't sure that that was it. Thank you for your input. I appreciate it.

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         theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         I think it's quite good. The main problem may be with your user name. If you are here to write, then using your business name is off-putting and looks spammy to be truthful. My suggestion would be to delete the account - save the article, of course, and republish under another name.
         
         I'd also make the article a bit longer by mentioning sensory activities for severely disabled children.
         
         Oh... and add some full size, properly accredited, legal-to-use images.
         
         Hope that helps.

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         calculus-geometryposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         It's a generic email that encompasses issues such as links that appear to be promotional and articles that appear to be stealth advertisements.

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   Terrielynn1posted 7 years ago

   I think it's a good read . There does seem to be a lot of advertising . I raised 2 special needs children and educational toys we found at teachers stores were amazing and some we made ourselves . It looks like a great page for info .

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      thebeckerlawfirmposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you.  Teacher stores are a great idea!

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         Terrielynn1posted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Maybe it would be helpful if you gave examples of the types of toys you reccomend and why.

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   Marisa Wrightposted 7 years ago

   I agree - delete the Hub, start a new account with another user name, and start again.
   
   HubPages is a multimedia site so yes, the article does need two or three photos - do make sure you have the permission of the site if you're going to use a photo from a website.  You can get free photos from Pixabay.  Split your text up into several capsules so you can put photos in between.

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   erorantesposted 7 years ago

   I like your hub. I can see. You only have one picture. Extra pictures will give your readers understanding of what you are writing with out reading. They will stay in your hub and read it. Then. They will give you their comments. I like your hub. My favorite store is Toysarous. They have a nice staff to help find the toys. You are great. I am looking forward reading your finished hub miss thebeckerlawfirm.

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