Comments and critiques most welcome

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   Green Is Goodposted 14 years ago

   Hi everyone
   
   I just joined a couple of days ago and have published 4 hubs so far. I'd be really grateful if some of you more experienced folk could check out my hub and offer any comments/criticism or offer any advice? Thanks in advance, oh wise ones
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/greenisgood

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   rsmalloryposted 14 years ago

   I just checked out one of your hubs-the one in the link above-good job.

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   Green Is Goodposted 14 years ago

   Thank you so much, and thanks also for leaving me my first comment! Does anybody have any ideas on how I could improve? I'm a total newbie at this and all input is really appreciated

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   frogdroppingposted 14 years ago

   Been, read it, left a comment. Good stuff.
   
   A couple of things, maybe break up the latter half? And add a link box and stick your links in there, with a little teaser?
   
   Couple more pictures, news capsule at the bottome (there's just got to be newsworthy green stuff out there)  and that should do it
   
   Welcome to hubpages!

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   Green Is Goodposted 14 years ago

   Thanks for your ideas and comments frogdropping. I'll certainly take them on board and do some tweaking. I've been thinking the second section is probably a little long and I hadn't even considered a link box or news capsule! I'll get onto that shortly. Thanks again for the warm welcome
   
   I can't help wondering if people are going to want to read about my chosen topics as they're mostly quite random so far, and with my mental processes I don't see the situation getting any better any time soon! Any feedback on this?
   
   Thanks all you lovely people x

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   frogdroppingposted 14 years ago

   Green - no one is more random than me. I just write and publish. Some is related to history or where I live. Some is monetized, and the rest is crap
   
   Write what suits you, or your purpose - it's about sharing

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   badcompany99posted 14 years ago

   Doncha just love Green lol !

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   frogdroppingposted 14 years ago

   Yep - I love me. For real

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      badcompany99posted 14 years agoin reply to this

      I honestly think you are the only hubber to have kept the same Avatar in the last 4 months. But hey ya can't beat self love, well unless you have a split personality then ya fall out a lot !

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   frogdroppingposted 14 years ago

   BC I truly laughed at what you said! lolol
   
   I accidently changed it once. I was messing with my profile. I was horrifed and stuck with a really dumb picture for 15 minutes.
   
   The only thing was, I wasn't trying to change my picture - I was fiddling with stuff
   
   No one noticed though ... hehe

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    badcompany99posted 14 years ago

    I fiddle with stuff as well, thankfully Hubpages cant see my webcam

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    Green Is Goodposted 14 years ago

    Well, I've tweaked it a little and I already think it looks much better - thanks so much for the advice!

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