I'd like feedback on my article: How to Put on Pants

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   BishamonSrposted 21 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: How to Put on Pants

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      AliciaCposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      I suspect that you will need to heavily edit your article and add a lot more information in order to get it featured. Many people have been putting on their own pants since childhood, including me and the people that I know.
      
      If you went into (reliable) details about how people with certain handicaps could put on their pants, that could be useful for specific readers. In addition, if you added details about putting pants on in unusual (but acceptable for this site) situations, that could be useful as well.
      
      The article ends with a sentence fragment, which should be changed.

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      Kenna McHughposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Go to the Help section of HubPages: https://hubpages.com/help-wizard/
      
      You'll learn about using images, choosing the article to write, and other helpful information to get featured.

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      greenmindposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Mkay but once we have them on, how on earth do we get them off? I think you need to write a follow-up.

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      CYong74posted 21 months agoin reply to this

      You intended for this to be humor or mockery?

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         BishamonSrposted 21 months agoin reply to this

         Mockery is harsh.

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      chef-de-jourposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Just make a slight change to the title and you could have a winner:
      
      How Putin Puts on His Pants

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   Rupert Taylorposted 21 months ago

   As Linda notes, we've all been putting our pants on for quite a while, in my case about 75 years, and I think I've pretty much mastered the technology. I also, in common with most people, don't need instructions on how to open a door or drink a glass of wine.
   
   I suggest you find a topic that will provide new information to readers.

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      eugbugposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      

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   FatFreddysCatposted 21 months ago

   I look forward to further entries in this series  like "How to Tie Your Shoes," "How to Drink Water," and "How to Walk by Putting One Foot in Front of The Other."

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