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In a Blur...

Updated on January 31, 2010

there are so many things

that I wanna do

sometimes I’m a fool

sometimes just so sure

the unexpected

the unpredictable

just don’t go away…


and I’m in a blur

baby, listen to me

there are so many things

that I wanna do

never thought I’d wake up

missin’ missin' you

never thought I’d stare out

wishin’ wishin’ you


so meet me outside

tonight gotta tell you

bits can no longer hide

no more can I deny this


and I’m in a blur

baby, listen to me

there’s nothin' much clear

than you and me

never thought I’d feel this

wantin' wantin' you

never thought I’d write this

thinkin' about you


there are so many things

that I wanna do

I’d like to do ‘em with you

so baby come to me

let’s kiss and gone in a blur


nothin’ else I wanna do

nothin’ else I wanna say

I’m in a blur

and nothing is much clear

now

it’s just me and you

listen to me when I say

I wanna be with you...



***about 3am, 31102009

on the road…going home



© 2009-10-31 b l a i s e


See my other poems...



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4 p.m.

Whoever You are

The Killer

You



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    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      Clearly, my Hubpages won't be amazing without reading from Maxi :) Happy weekend my friend! xoxo

    • BeyondMax profile image

      BeyondMax 

      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Yes, Fehl, I can confirm, I fell into your creative, captivating blur, it was amazing =)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Oh thank you Freya :) hahaha Yup, I'm in the middle

    • Freya Cesare profile image

      Freya Cesare 

      7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Sweet, Blaise. Like always. I love the way you write your feeling in poem. Always sweet.

      Becoming halloween girl? Which one is you in that avatar? In the middle? Cute one.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Hello again Ron! Superb?! Nah I just write...... :) XO

    • niceandcool profile image

      niceandcool 

      7 years ago from Philippines

      i really love to read all your ingenious thoughts... how i wish i could write superb stuff just like yours. :)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      hahaha It's cute seeing you two chasing each other here. Hairy men LMAO i dunno what's gotten into you moi friend. LOL Everyone just turns deeper once in a while hey. Frank is NOT = to talking too much. Hmmm you just are honest and uncontrollable like me maybe? hahaha TC moi friend.

    • Astra Nomik profile image

      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      We do that. We play games on each other. Ha. Don't mind us. Oh the hairy men, what the crapula was I thinking? Hahaha. I am embarrassed by that.

      As for who is deepest? I think I am. LOL. (Frank = talks too much?) Maybe. xx

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Yeap it's lyrical poetry. It's so good to see you back here in HP and here in my pages Brands ;)

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      brandonfan 

      7 years ago from Mid West

      I love this, sounds like it should be made into a lyric! Well done Blaise. :-)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Yeah but I like seeing you both in my pages. You are deep and Cassy is straightforward. Sometimes, Cassy is deep and you're frank ;) LMAO you're so funny Cath! Hubs about hairy men? Seriously, are there? LOL Wow, chasing each other in Hubpages, how cute is that :)

    • Astra Nomik profile image

      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      I am being pursued slowly by Cassy through your hubs, have you noticed? She is following the hubs I have visited. I'm going to check hubs on hairy men, see can I throw her off my trail. LOL. Oh funny...

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      haha my vintage poetry, I love em :) I sound like rapping here lol Thanks for the goldie comments :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      More than amazing, you are a great poet. It oozes along, very natural, and easy. Oldie but Goldie, blaise. :)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      Reading oldies is so good isn't it? :) Thanks Dim. XX

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      8 years ago from Great Britain

      Don´t know how I missed this one before now. Beautiful. xx

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      LOLOL thanks for the good insights Ralwus. I always concur in them :) Life is crazy beautiful, enjoy!

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      ralwus 

      8 years ago

      Not too fast though, take the time to enjoy. LOL One day you will be old and hopefully able to relive it all in your heart and mind. Romance/love is such a wonderful, destructive, life changing, challenging, and life building thing. Nice poem. CC

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      thank you wolfpack! :)

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      wolfpack5 

      8 years ago from Alberta Canada

      Oh blaise, your a romantic very nice hub :)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      yeah vague but so clear at the same time...

      didn't use some deep words as I don't want anythin in a blur anymore LOL

      thanks Dark Heart! ;p

    • Dark Heart profile image

      Dark Heart 

      8 years ago

      What a captivating image-to be in a blur.

      Is everything vague and indistinct. Unfocused?

      Except fot that one part-that needle sharp burning.

      I love the simplicity of this work and it's emotional

      power. I can feel the desire in it.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      thank you Keira! you have a good heart..God bless ;p

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      keira7 

      8 years ago

      You are a very good writer. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. God Bless you:)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      thanks lance ;p

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      lancelonie 

      8 years ago

      Your poem is awesome!!! :)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      it means a lot...thanks Ash... :)

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      CiscoPixie 

      8 years ago

      beautiful... absolutely beautiful... :)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      thank you creativeone ;p

      it's nice to see you here again

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      benny Faye Douglass 

      8 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

      Thanks for a very nice, cute and sweet hub. thanks for sharing. creativeone59

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