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Five For Fall - haiku
Coffee and muffin
spiced with pumpkin. Off to Work!
Stuck behind school bus.
Reds, yellows, and browns.
Mounds so high they touch the sky.
Whoosh! Jumping in leaves!
Crisp Fresh. Donuts. Pies!
An apple treat a day keeps
Winter blues at bay.
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While modern Haiku poetry focuses mainly on the 5-7-5 structure of the poem, there are other rules that apply when writing a traditional Haiku. I find writing a modern Haiku tons of fun. Everyone should try it. However, there is something strikingly.
Autumn trees ablaze.
Pale in comparison to
fire in her eyes
Green. Yellow. Orange.
Twisted gnarly pile of warts.
Oh my, what a gourd!
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CAT - thank you! the new year started rough but getting better every day, so that's good, right? sorry for the late reply. I have been mostly absent from hubpages and I am just now returning... hope to see you around
Hello Dana,
I just discovered your haiku verses for Fall. Very nice!
Hope your new year is off to a good start. Cat :)
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thelyricwriter - yes. it has been about a year since I wrote these. I am glad to see that they are holding up well. thank you so very much for sharing. :)
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James-wolve - thank you. it really means a lot to know you like this
Shared on Facebook this time by. I read so many poems on Hubpages and forgot that I read this poem. I didn't realize it had been so long. I love fall and your poem describes it perfect Dana. Well done "again."
So beautiful! great job ,thanks!!
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Thank you Lisa!
so happy you like them... always appreciate being shared :)
GREAT! Shared and voted up!
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HappyMikeWritter - thank you so very much for taking the time to leave this comment. I write because I enjoy it, but the way I write is always with my readers in mind. I want to give you an experience that makes my work worth reading. so pleased you like it.
Your work is unique. I am a real fan of articles with soul in it and this one has it in bucket loads. Thank you for sharing.
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Daisy - you know what they say about great minds.... I just thought about this collection today when I heard that Fall begins tomorrow... Thank you for the visit
These are delightful little Haikus, fall is my favorite season, so I truly enjoyed these!
Dana,
It's September 21...fall. I've returned to read your haiku and senryu once again.
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jenbeach21 - usually I am sad to see the summer end, but this year I am all "summered out". Bring on pumpkin pie and apple cider and yummy fall treats. :)
tillsontitan - THANK YOU for the revisit. I am glad these have held up. and thanks a billion for sharing. it is much appreciated. I am horrible at self promotion so I really appreciate it when friends spread my work around.... wishing you well.
Way to usher in fall. These beautiful haikus are as great now as they were when you originally wrote them....should I say ever autumn?
Voted up, awesome, interesting, and pinned.
I am ready for fall and pumpkin pie!
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CMCastro - Thank you! I loved selectin gpics for this one. I still need to do a winter hiaku. Maybe once it snows I will feel inspired. :)
These haikus are very sweet,and the pumpkins look so yummy!
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Laurinzo - thank you. i enjoyed capturing my favorite things about autumn in haiku. it is such an amazing art form. hugs. :)
What an incredible tribute to that form known as Haiku ... and the images were perfect reminders of midwestern falls I experienced in youth. I sure do miss the coloring of fall...
These haiku are beautifully done
Awesome Dana
Laurinzo
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shruti sheshadri - WOW! thanks for the amazing comment. I enjoyed writing this one and selecting the images. looks like my work paid off. :)
This is soo awesome, a powerful topic indeed :) stunning work, voted up:)
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thelyricwriter - Thank you so much for the complimets, and thanks bunches for the votes and share!
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Sunshine625 - Hi Linda! happy fall to you too! As much as I miss the sunny summer, I do love the fall. :)
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rebeccamealey - a fellow fall lover, fantastic! thrilled you like them
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Deb- thank you. you are a doll. happy to share my favorite season with you :)
Dana, beautiful poem. Very fitting for this time of year. Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and shared.
Happy Fall Dana! ;)
These are really cute Haikus and amazing photos. You did my favorite season justice!
I love these! You've really evoked the emotions and feel of autumn.
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ignugent17 - thank you. knowing people like them make them even more fun to write
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Debbie - Thank you. You really are too sweet! hugs. :)
Great haiku! I enjoyed reading all of it. :-)
Dana you so cute.. I love this haiku.. I loved pumkin and i love fall the color..
many blessings and sharing
debbie
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Vincent Moore - I am always so honored by your comments. To be considered a poet is one of the highest honors I can think of having bestowed upon me. Thank you... and of course thanks as well for the vote and share. I write out of pleasure and desire, but you know it doubles the pleasure when you can share it with others.
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AudreyHowitt - Nice to see you stopping by another one of my hubs. Thank you for the compliment.
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midget38 - I am blessed to live in a region that has four distinct seasons. They are all so beautifully unique. Though sometimes the constant changing makes your head spin... I am happy to share the experience of Autimnwithyou through my words.... Thanks for sharing!
Don't we just love the change in seasons. Beautifully artfully conceived my fine poet. Truly a splendour reading your art. Voted Up and shared.
This set is really lovely!
Wonderful odes to autumn in these Haikus. Very cheery...I wish I could experience all 4 seasons here in Singapore. Thanks, Dana, and I share this as well.
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Jamie - after the summer I had (heat waves galore) I am especially excited for fall this year. Hope you have an awesome Autmn. :)
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tobusiness - a feast. I like that. A feast for the eyes and the mind!
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unknown spy - you are too sweet. so happy you enjoyed these so much. thanks for sharing. the more the merrier! :)
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Maria! Always love your alliterative comments.... Glad you love how I do haiku because I love to do it. I enjoy the brevity yet the explosion of image and feeling.... Thanks as alwayd for reading and for the votes!
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Hello Nell - Yes. Coffee and a muffin is a great fall treat. And then bam! The school bus - the twist element of the Haiku. :)
Dana, I am excited as you for all things fall. What great Haiku's. Jamie
A veritable Autumn feast. Up and beautiful.
whew! that was really amazing! sharing this to whole wide world :)
An awesome autumnal arrangement ... I love how you do haiku...!
Voted UP and ABI. Hugs, Maria
Hi Dana, what a great haiku! and what a lovely thought, coffee and muffin!
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Docmo - What a generous comment. Such a compliment! Words like yours encourage me to continue down the writing path.... thanks for the votes too of course.
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Sueswan - HELLO! It's been a while sincec i have jumped in leaves, but my cat never missed the chance :)
Thank u for reading, and for voting :)
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Hyphenbird - Thank you for you sweet comment. Happy to know I was able to capture the beauty of fall. I feel so blssed to live in a part of the world where this season offers so much beauty before winter creeps in.
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ImKarn23 - Yum. What a treat! And what a treat for me to have you share my poems. Thank You!
Happy Thanksgiving :)
Beautifully done, Dana. You've captured the splendours of Fall in these elegantly assembled word paintings. you manage to capture sights, sounds, smells and the feel of fall and bring us an instant autumn memory. Loved these Haikus... voted up/awesome.
Hi Dana
"Reds, yellows, and browns.
Mounds so high they touch the sky.
Whoosh! Jumping in leaves!"
Wonderful! I love your fall haikus.
Voted up and away
Have a good day.
You perfectly describe fall. It is just like that right now in my part of the world. This Hub is just beautiful.
Dana...as i read your perfect autumn haikus - i am drinking hot coffee and having a piece of warm pumpkin pie with ice cream! Mmmmmm...
This weekend is Canadian Thanksgiving!
Sharing forward, my friend..
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Teahces - I am so honestly glad to see you stopping by another one of my hubs. Thank you for your comment. I am getting much better at the visual aspect of hubs. Encouragement form hubbers like you has been invaluable to my growth as a writer. Thank you. And thanks for the pin. Thats awesome!
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LaThing - I look forward to Autumn every year. And it seems every year I forgoet that the kids are back to school. and I get stuck behind those darn busses!... Thank u for the votes! :)
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sen.sush23 - What a wonderfully sweet comment, I am so glad you liked it. I am just now learning how to choose the best photos and to set things up visually so they add to the words. I am so happy it made your morining. I saw your facebook comment this morning and it started off my day on a happy note. Thank you! *hugs*
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IntegrityYes - I always love when you stop by. Thanks for the vote too!
This is the perfect picture of fall for me. I love those silly gourds and the apple pie and leaves are beautiful. A simple poem filled with all the essence of the autumn season. Voted up and pinned.
My favorite time of the year, and you haikus describe it so well! I had a chuckle when I read about the school bus. Isn't that so true, lol...... Perfect color for the Fall, too. Voting up and beautiful.....
Dana, this is the best thing that has happened to me this morning..I am combining it with a cup of Darjeeling tea and you can guess the result..Awesome! I am voting this up 'beautiful'....and the pictures are just so perfectly haiku. I am bowled over by you... Sharing with others too, and leaving a hug on FB page.
That rocks and I definitely voted up.
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Mhatter99 - Thank you for stopping by. I am truly happy to know that I got the mood right. I adore Autumn. And even more, I adore giving you enjoyable things to read.
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suzzycue - i am so happy that you appreciate these. i do put thought into each and every one. so thrilled that you like the last one. i love gourds. some of them are so fantastically weird looking! nature really is great. :)
These are autum alright. Love the mood. Thank you.
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girishpuri - thank you. the beautiful colors has got to be one of the best parts of fall in the northeast US
rcrumple - glad you liked!
Sunshine - I publish a hub and Woosh! There's Linda! Thanks for stopping by! I owe you some cowboy limericks. i better get on that!
Dana a lot of thought went into this fall haiku. I especially loved the last line having warts. How something with warts becomes beautiful only happens in nature. Well done and perfect Haiku form.
Woot for Fall. Awesome haikus!!!
Loved these, Dana! Great job!
beautiful imagination of colors and nature, voted beautiful.
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