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Heartbeat: A Poem

Updated on August 17, 2011
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I could dance all night to the rhthym of your heart


Beautiful dreams gradually awakened me to you


Your presence lit me up right from the start



Though I thought you would never come


Broken hearts stringing together


But waiting never made me totally undone



I know God would send you to me


His timing is always perfect


Now things are right and I can see



I will continue to move to the beat of your love


Grateful for your eternal commitment


A true blessing from above


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      5 years ago

      EBower: You like the three line couplet, don't you.

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      Erin Bower 5 years ago from Georgia

      I suppose so. I don't always have a plan when writing poetry; it just flows out of me. Although, if I see I'm starting a certain pattern, then I'll try to continue with it throughout its entirety.

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      5 years ago

      Interesting, anyway. I was looking at this again. Many poets seem to go for the 4 line poem.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      I like your three line couplet... Very beautiful.. I love it... BRAVO..

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      Erin Bower 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thanks! (I take a little bow) You are too kind! :)

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      5 years ago

      Yes, it is a nice poem.

      And I also like the line:

      'His timing is always perfect'.

      Blessings.

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      Erin Bower 5 years ago from Georgia

      Thank you; of course that idea or 'saying' is not originally mine, but I like it, too.

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      5 years ago

      YW. And you know, if you think about it, if His timing is indeed perfect, it must logically refer obliquely to the possibility of a marriage made in heaven ... !

      Blessings.

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      Charu Bhatnagar 5 years ago from India

      Beautiful poem.

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      Erin Bower 5 years ago from Georgia

      Charu Bhatnagar: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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      Michael Beskalis 4 years ago from San Francisco

      You dipped your pen in a bowl of passion and love as ink. Not many words yet deep enough to take a swim. Beautiful.

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      Erin Bower 4 years ago from Georgia

      Michael Beskalis: Thank you for your encouraging words!

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