Souls Entwined - Poem
Though our hearts be torn apart
Our souls are forever entwined
For you have gone your way, and I have gone mine
I used to listen to your heartbeat
You once listened to mine
And together we danced to their rhythm
Could it be that our souls still dance?
Through the cosmos,
Skipping through the darkness and gliding past the stars?
Perhaps not to the same rhythm as once they did,
But could they dance still?
Upon the clouds and along the Milky Way
Your heart beats a different rhythm now
As does mine
And time has changed us, still
Our souls are forever entwined
Dancing through time and the darkness of night
As a distant star with its twinkling light
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© 2010 miss_jkim
Comments
I really like the flow to your poem, just because you're no longer together doesn't mean the connection is gone
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I couldn't agree more ek.
There is a reason it says "and the two shall become one." The soul of the two are bound for eternity, even if they part in the flesh and spirit.
Thanks for your comment
...your heart and mind as a writer is a precious soul entwined ....and one that is always a gift to your lucky readers....
- Author
Thank you Colin.
Your words are so poetic and a pleasing balm to my heart. Be careful though, you might make my head swell.
Very nice poem! Well put, just because two people separate doesn't mean that they are completely separated. Somewhere in mind, or soul, the memory remains; it can never be erased.
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The spirit and soul that are joined together, are not easily seperated. Even if body and mind are no longer as one.
Thank you IamMaster, for your kind and wise words.
This is breathtakingly beautiful. Love the images you painted on my heart. I am truly blessed by reading. Voted up and beautiful
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Thank you Jspot, for the read and the vote of confidence.
Just dropping by to find solace in the lines you've drawn for us readers. I love it til the last drop of lines.
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Thank you Don.
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