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Souls Entwined - Poem

Updated on February 3, 2015


Though our hearts be torn apart

Our souls are forever entwined

For you have gone your way, and I have gone mine


I used to listen to your heartbeat

You once listened to mine

And together we danced to their rhythm


Could it be that our souls still dance?

Through the cosmos,

Skipping through the darkness and gliding past the stars?


Perhaps not to the same rhythm as once they did,

But could they dance still?

Upon the clouds and along the Milky Way


Your heart beats a different rhythm now

As does mine

And time has changed us,    still


Our souls are forever entwined

Dancing through time and the darkness of night

As a distant star with its twinkling light

© 2010 miss_jkim


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    • miss_jkim profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago

      Thank you Don.

    • DON BALDERAS profile image


      5 years ago

      Just dropping by to find solace in the lines you've drawn for us readers. I love it til the last drop of lines.

    • miss_jkim profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago

      Thank you Jspot, for the read and the vote of confidence.

    • Jspot profile image

      lost love 

      6 years ago from Flames of water and love

      This is breathtakingly beautiful. Love the images you painted on my heart. I am truly blessed by reading. Voted up and beautiful

    • miss_jkim profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      The spirit and soul that are joined together, are not easily seperated. Even if body and mind are no longer as one.

      Thank you IamMaster, for your kind and wise words.

    • IamMaster profile image


      7 years ago from USA

      Very nice poem! Well put, just because two people separate doesn't mean that they are completely separated. Somewhere in mind, or soul, the memory remains; it can never be erased.

    • miss_jkim profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Thank you Colin.

      Your words are so poetic and a pleasing balm to my heart. Be careful though, you might make my head swell.

    • epigramman profile image


      7 years ago

      ...your heart and mind as a writer is a precious soul entwined ....and one that is always a gift to your lucky readers....

    • miss_jkim profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      I couldn't agree more ek.

      There is a reason it says "and the two shall become one." The soul of the two are bound for eternity, even if they part in the flesh and spirit.

      Thanks for your comment

    • ek ellis profile image

      ek ellis 

      7 years ago

      I really like the flow to your poem, just because you're no longer together doesn't mean the connection is gone


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