Word Which Left Unsaid - Original Love Poem
"If you love someone tell them, because hearts are often broken by words left unspoken."
There are many things in our lives which often pass as unspoken; many words which left unsaid. Later we regret on the decision of holding up. Live life to the fullest, speak your heart out, so you will not have to regret it later. You will be contend as you did precisely what you wanted to at sometime.
POEM:
Did I ever tell you?
How much you meant for me?
You were alive in my scent
And in every breath of me.
When you used to walk besides me
I felt I was intact and completed
But now when you are not with me
I am squandered and depleted.
Dissipated in your memories
Deprived of your love
Consumed by moments
You have always been above
Undermined, crippled and wrecked
But I still remember your face.
Those gloomy eyes when you said good-bye
And I foolishly challenged time to race.
Now I miss you, and everything about you
I regret those words which left unsaid
I should have told you, when you were here
Though I am announcing it and sure I am late
Proclaiming now won’t change my fate
And you are very far and distant
Up in the clouds, dwelling in heaven
But can you still hear the words which left unsaid
That I never ever confessed?
That how much you mean for me
And you are still alive in my scent,
And in every breath of me.
Comments
beautiful poem really heartfelt and touching, voted up!
Very pretty poem. Voted up and interesting.
wow...this is exceptionally good. love your work. voted up :)
Your writing are beautiful! This is so sad, yet so common. Very moving. Thanks!
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Thank you :)
this poem touched my heart.love your writing.
fantastic poem, love the ending, great photos and music video at the bottom.Voted up etc, nice work :)
oh, so sad...and yeah i do agree with you...
The loss of a partner is always hard especially when the right words where never expressed and told with genuine emotion lining it. Great write thanks for sharing.
smiles :)
bella
Hunbbel Meer,
This is what is human life. When people are with us we take them for granted. It is when they go away we yearn for them. Say what you can for it may be too late. Voted up!
Lots of Love,
MAKUSR
Hunbbel, its a beautiful and sad poem. It has moved me for sure. Life is too short and unpredictable,its always better to speak out whatever is in our hearts!
I am looking forward to reading more of your hubs soon!
thank you for sharing!
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@SheliaKay: Better late than never :) Thanks for stopping by. And agreed with your point, that everyone has some regrets. Although, the important thing should be that one expresses his love feelings to all the beloved ones, so he wouldn't have to regret it later :)
I love your poem. I think we all have those regrets after we lose a loved one. I know I have been lately. You've got my vote......
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@Naima: Thanks for the kind words and the appreciation :)
You write very well. Though it's sad but you wrapped your feelings very beautifully:) Vote up!:)
Keep up the good work:)
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@Fuller-Life: Thank you for your kind words. I am glad that you liked it :)
Lovely poem Hunbbel. I really enjoyed reading it until the end. Indeed we should say what we need to say before it's too late. Sometimes your freedom and your blessing are in what you say. Great Hub.
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@Movie Master: I thank you for stopping by and taking your time off, to read my poem - appreciable :)
Such a beautiful and sad poem, we should never hold back from saying what we feel in our hearts.
Thank you for sharing and voting up.
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@Sueswan: I could not have said it better than you. Actions speak louder than words. It is 101% true, and when actions start to speak otherwise, trust begins to crumble. So, it is one of the most important things that we show our love with our actions and care for the person.
I'm glad that you liked my poem. Thanks for stopping by :)
Heart wrenchingly beautiful.
Not only is it important to tell someone that we love them before it is too late but to show them as well. Actions speak louder than words.
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@always exploring: Thank you for stopping by. And of course, you are right. Love them while you can.
So very true, express your love while you can. soon they are gone and it's too late. Thank you.
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@writer20: Thank you :)
Wonderfully sad poem about a really good lady.
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@DTroth: I thank you for such wonderful words, appreciation and encouragement. I highly appreciate it. Thank you :)
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@Patty Inglish, MS:
Appreciation and a comment for an elite and prolific hubber like you is no less than an honour to me. I am really glad that you liked it. Thank you so much for stopping by.
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@Paradise 7: Thank you :)
Hi Hunbbel.
I'm breathless. Speechless. Beautiful, beautiful poem. Very true.
V UP, U, A and B
Thank you for sharing such a personal pain with us, Hunbbel.
Diana
p.s. The James Blunt video is awesome.
The layout and links are very good in this Hub, as is the poem. Rated Up.
Ah, me...so true.
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@thebluestar: Indeed, every second is precious. We should confess our feelings to our loved ones before its too late.
Thank you for your comment :)
Lovely sentiments. Very true, tell everyone that you love them everyday, don't let time just rest every second is precious.
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Thanks Subron7. I am glad you took the time to read my poem :)
Good poem, Hunbbel Meer. Yes, losing someone is like standing on an empty highway.
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@prasahnt angiras: Thanks for the appreciation. Glad you liked it.
its so sad that she died...i loved your poem,its beautiful but it costed life of someone.if there is heaven you will meet her there.
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