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Word Which Left Unsaid - Original Love Poem

Updated on March 23, 2012

"If you love someone tell them, because hearts are often broken by words left unspoken."


There are many things in our lives which often pass as unspoken; many words which left unsaid. Later we regret on the decision of holding up. Live life to the fullest, speak your heart out, so you will not have to regret it later. You will be contend as you did precisely what you wanted to at sometime.

POEM:


Did I ever tell you?

How much you meant for me?

You were alive in my scent

And in every breath of me.



When you used to walk besides me

I felt I was intact and completed

But now when you are not with me

I am squandered and depleted.


Dissipated in your memories

Deprived of your love

Consumed by moments

You have always been above


Undermined, crippled and wrecked

But I still remember your face.

Those gloomy eyes when you said good-bye

And I foolishly challenged time to race.



Now I miss you, and everything about you

I regret those words which left unsaid

I should have told you, when you were here


Though I am announcing it and sure I am late

Proclaiming now won’t change my fate



And you are very far and distant

Up in the clouds, dwelling in heaven

But can you still hear the words which left unsaid

That I never ever confessed?



That how much you mean for me

And you are still alive in my scent,

And in every breath of me.

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      Prashant angiras 5 years ago from shimla(india)

      its so sad that she died...i loved your poem,its beautiful but it costed life of someone.if there is heaven you will meet her there.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @prasahnt angiras: Thanks for the appreciation. Glad you liked it.

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Good poem, Hunbbel Meer. Yes, losing someone is like standing on an empty highway.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      Thanks Subron7. I am glad you took the time to read my poem :)

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      Annette Donaldson 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Lovely sentiments. Very true, tell everyone that you love them everyday, don't let time just rest every second is precious.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @thebluestar: Indeed, every second is precious. We should confess our feelings to our loved ones before its too late.

      Thank you for your comment :)

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      Paradise7 5 years ago from Upstate New York

      Ah, me...so true.

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      Patty Inglish 5 years ago from North America

      The layout and links are very good in this Hub, as is the poem. Rated Up.

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      Diana Owens 5 years ago from My Little Hole In The Wall, HubPages, USA

      Hi Hunbbel.

      I'm breathless. Speechless. Beautiful, beautiful poem. Very true.

      V UP, U, A and B

      Thank you for sharing such a personal pain with us, Hunbbel.

      Diana

      p.s. The James Blunt video is awesome.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Paradise 7: Thank you :)

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Patty Inglish, MS:

      Appreciation and a comment for an elite and prolific hubber like you is no less than an honour to me. I am really glad that you liked it. Thank you so much for stopping by.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @DTroth: I thank you for such wonderful words, appreciation and encouragement. I highly appreciate it. Thank you :)

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wonderfully sad poem about a really good lady.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @writer20: Thank you :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      So very true, express your love while you can. soon they are gone and it's too late. Thank you.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @always exploring: Thank you for stopping by. And of course, you are right. Love them while you can.

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Heart wrenchingly beautiful.

      Not only is it important to tell someone that we love them before it is too late but to show them as well. Actions speak louder than words.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Sueswan: I could not have said it better than you. Actions speak louder than words. It is 101% true, and when actions start to speak otherwise, trust begins to crumble. So, it is one of the most important things that we show our love with our actions and care for the person.

      I'm glad that you liked my poem. Thanks for stopping by :)

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Such a beautiful and sad poem, we should never hold back from saying what we feel in our hearts.

      Thank you for sharing and voting up.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Movie Master: I thank you for stopping by and taking your time off, to read my poem - appreciable :)

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      Fuller-Life 5 years ago from Washington, DC

      Lovely poem Hunbbel. I really enjoyed reading it until the end. Indeed we should say what we need to say before it's too late. Sometimes your freedom and your blessing are in what you say. Great Hub.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Fuller-Life: Thank you for your kind words. I am glad that you liked it :)

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      Naima 5 years ago

      You write very well. Though it's sad but you wrapped your feelings very beautifully:) Vote up!:)

      Keep up the good work:)

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @Naima: Thanks for the kind words and the appreciation :)

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      SheliaKay 5 years ago from Marietta, Ohio..... but born and raised in Northern Ohio on Lake Erie

      I love your poem. I think we all have those regrets after we lose a loved one. I know I have been lately. You've got my vote......

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      @SheliaKay: Better late than never :) Thanks for stopping by. And agreed with your point, that everyone has some regrets. Although, the important thing should be that one expresses his love feelings to all the beloved ones, so he wouldn't have to regret it later :)

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      sonia05 5 years ago from india

      Hunbbel, its a beautiful and sad poem. It has moved me for sure. Life is too short and unpredictable,its always better to speak out whatever is in our hearts!

      I am looking forward to reading more of your hubs soon!

      thank you for sharing!

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      Manoj Kumar Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Hunbbel Meer,

      This is what is human life. When people are with us we take them for granted. It is when they go away we yearn for them. Say what you can for it may be too late. Voted up!

      Lots of Love,

      MAKUSR

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      The loss of a partner is always hard especially when the right words where never expressed and told with genuine emotion lining it. Great write thanks for sharing.

      smiles :)

      bella

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      oh, so sad...and yeah i do agree with you...

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      Troyangeluk 5 years ago from UK

      fantastic poem, love the ending, great photos and music video at the bottom.Voted up etc, nice work :)

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      Uzma Shaheen Bhatti 5 years ago from Lahore,Pakistan

      this poem touched my heart.love your writing.

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      Syed Hunbbel Meer 5 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan.

      Thank you :)

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      SanneL 5 years ago from Sweden

      Your writing are beautiful! This is so sad, yet so common. Very moving. Thanks!

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      tesslyn suzanne 5 years ago from kerala, India

      wow...this is exceptionally good. love your work. voted up :)

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      Janine Huldie 5 years ago from New York, New York

      Very pretty poem. Voted up and interesting.

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      shruti sheshadri 4 years ago from Bangalore, India

      beautiful poem really heartfelt and touching, voted up!

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