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Let's have a little silly contest. Haikus. Here's mine: We're all just Gummi Bea

  1. wingedcentaur profile image83
    wingedcentaurposted 7 years ago

    Let's have a little silly contest. Haikus. Here's mine: We're all just Gummi Bears floating...

    toward a candy corn moon. I am the devourer of sweets, born sucking a caramel-covered spoon.

    Give us yours!

  2. Ginger Meow profile image80
    Ginger Meowposted 7 years ago

    Now I am feeling hungry after reading this. Gummi Bears, bouncing here and there and everywhere.

    I'll give it a go:

    We are all just deep fried Mars Bars slowely drowing in a sea of lard, clutching to a life boat of chocolate trying to dodge the floating honeycomb chuncks that sweep our nougat paths. Sprinkle this with drizzles of honey and chips of peppermint as life sweetners and this is the meaning of life!

  3. wingedcentaur profile image83
    wingedcentaurposted 7 years ago

    Brilliant Ginger Meow! I love it. You've got the spirit. I voted you response waaaay up! big_smile

  4. ArtByCari profile image65
    ArtByCariposted 7 years ago

    Aren't Haiku's 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables? I'll stick to that format, but I apologize if it's wrong. And I'll also stick with the food theme:

    Tempting as it is, I will not eat that carton, Of cookies and creme.


    I had a seventh grader write this one once:

    Haiku's are quite nice, But sometimes they don't make sense, Refrigerator.

 
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