Finish off the Poem.... I cross my heart and hope to die stick a needle in my ey

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   davidosposted 8 years ago

   I cross my heart and hope to die
   Stick a needle in my eye
   I used to get so very high
   But now all I have done is lie
   I can't believe I still get by
   My oh my, I barely even try
   What was once an ocean is now so dry
   This is something I can no longer deny
   I cross my heart and hope to die.

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   Shivani Dewsposted 7 years ago

   I cross my heart and hope to die,
   Stick a needle in my eye,
   Within heart, my soul cry,
   Down the cheeks, tears roll by,
   Life mourns and asks me 'why?
   Rise,  give yourself a try,
   Falling and rising are part of a game,
   Don't ever take failures as shame,
   It's yours fault, to others never blame,
   Hard work will one day bring a fame,
   All you need to do is to enjoy the game!
   Work hard till your life  succeeds,
   Focus on flowers, ignore the weeds.
   
   Thanks for reading!

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      Nirved Tiwariposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Right

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      Dabby Lyricposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Love it!

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   Susan SJposted 7 years ago

   I cross my heart
   
   And hope to die
   
   Stick a needle
   
   In my eye
   
   Run back in tears
   
   To just slip in and cry
   
   More bitterness to life
   
   I am here, and I wonder why​

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      Dabby Lyricposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I dig it!

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   Grace Hicks AOLposted 7 years ago

   cross my heart
   and hope to die
   stick a needle in my eye
   an eye for an eye
   with such a belief
   a person will die
   cross my fingers
   behind my back
   I lie lie lie lie
   so I wont die
   cross myself
   to save my soul
   the Father, Son and holy Ghost

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   demolaadelowoposted 7 years ago

   I cross my heart
   
   And hope to die
   
   Stick a needle in my eye
   
   And drive the knife through my crest
   
   For I must tonight indeed die
   
   Not the death that causes to die
   
   But that which strengthens the crust
   
   Where men to evil die
   
   But die not of it
   
   That is the death I want to die.

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   Jazmyn Tateposted 7 years ago

   I cross my heart and hope to die stick a needle in my eye my lips are sealed not even a lie for god knows me enough to my grave where i die my heart is true so i won't tell a lie to you.

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   DGtal Montageposted 7 years ago

   I cross my heart and hope to die
   stick a needle in my eye,
   Let the bleeding drops sing out
   An elegy for the passer-by.
   
   For no one would be down with me
   When in slumber deep I lie;
   Perhaps a lonesome willow leaf,
   To bid my fleeting soul, goodbye.

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   Jaye Randolphposted 7 years ago

   ...and a promise is true I won't break my word, my word to you is true. Never question what I say because I would never lie to you, no matter what goes on around us I'll be right here for you.

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   Trang Lanaposted 7 years ago

   "Cross my heart
   and hope to die,
   stick a needle in my eye
   wait a moment,
   I spoke a lie
   I never really
   wanted to die.
   but if i may
   and if I might
   my heart is open
   for tonight
   though my lips are sealed
   and a promise is true
   I won't break my word
   my word to you.
   
   Cross my heart
   hope to die,
   stick a needle in my eye.
   a secret's a secret
   my word is forever
   I will tell no one
   about your cruel endeavor.
   You claim no pain
   but i see right through
   your words in
   everything you do.
   Teary eyes
   broken heart
   life has torn
   you apart
   
   Cross my heart
   hope to die,
   stick a needle in my eye
   I loved you then
   I love you now
   I'll still love you
   though i'll break my vow.
   I can't hold this secret
   any longer
   it's hurting you
   not making you stronger.
   You're my friend
   so i'll risk your respect
   by hurting you
   i can protect
   I'll save yourself
   since you will not
   you might hate me
   but i'll give it a shot.
   I'm willing to risk
   our bond that we own
   so long as you're safe
   you won't be alone.
   
   Cross my heart
   hope to die,
   stick a needle in my eye
   break my promise
   tell a lie
   save my friend
   though, maybe it's 'bye."
   http://shoplamdep4u.com

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    Abdullah ishfaqposted 7 years ago

    let me go
    bye bye

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    Frankie Riccardiposted 7 years ago

    Cross my heart and hope to die stick a needle in my Eyore cause a futhamucka get as down not done as that deserve a bit of relief beliefs release and cease ketamine foe a heroine's reach. ....
    
    
    
    
    beech

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       Callmeishmaelposted 7 years agoin reply to this

       It might be nice if that made amy sense.

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    FatFreddysCatposted 7 years ago

    Cross my heart and hope to die
    Poke a chicken in the eye
    Eat a horse manure pie
    While reading "Catcher in the Rye"

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       Sharlee01posted 4 years agoin reply to this

       Cross my heart and hope to die
       Poke a chicken in the eye
       While reading "Catcher in the Rye"
       downing a huge piece of cherry pie
       just knowing it will end up on my thigh
       which brought a huge tear to my eye
       realizing about my weight I will have to lie
       which at this point all I could do was give out a big old sigh.

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    Live to Learnposted 7 years ago

    Cross my heart and hope to die
    Stick a needle in my eye yie yie
    That hurt. Wish I hadn't done something that stupid.

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    Rebecca Brewerposted 7 years ago

    Cross my heart
    and hope to die
    stick a needle in my
    thigh oh wait im dreaming
    im not a diabetic
    i can eat that pie
    so savor on
    and dont forget the
    whipped cream cause
    once again its only a dream.

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    Tia Powleyposted 6 years ago

    Cross my heart,
    and hope to die,
    stick a needle in my eye,
    poke a dagger through my toe,
    put rocks where they should not go,
    peel the skin back from my arm,
    do myself all sorts of harm.

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