When writing a story intended to be lengthy, is it better to have a single long

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  1. ThompsonPen profile image64
    ThompsonPenposted 10 years ago

    When writing a story intended to be lengthy, is it better to have a single long novel or a series?

    I find myself contemplating often whether or not to turn my potentially very lengthy novel into a series. I have the story all laid out, and it could work quite well in divided sections which could either be their own novel, or just a new section in one complete book. I am afraid though that a long book would be daunting to a reader, and discourage them to commit to reading it. what do you think?

  2. MickS profile image59
    MickSposted 10 years ago

    It is best to write what is required for a satisfactory novel.  Some stories are best told in one hit, some require a series, some just a trilogy.  Only the author knows what the story takes, although the publishers and agents, who really are only interested in making money, may pretend that they know.  It is oft times said that editors are failed or frustrated writer.

    1. Laura Schneider profile image88
      Laura Schneiderposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Hahaha MickS, I just love your comment, "...editors are failed or frustrated writer"s. Been there, done that. (It's way easier to edit than to write--shh). I agree--only the author really knows (gut feeling) whether a book/series is required. Cheers!

  3. Lady Wordsmith profile image77
    Lady Wordsmithposted 10 years ago

    I love a series.  But I also love a long novel!  And what I really love is a long series of long novels! 

    What I think you should do - and I'm no expert, but I do know a tiny little bit about publishing - is write your story and send it to an agent or a publisher (probably an agent), and if they like it, they will know whether it will work (sell) better as a long novel or a series of shorter ones. 

    Mind you, knowing whether you're going to write a series or one long novel will affect the way you write it and what you decide to leave in or take out.  It's a tricky one, without knowing anything about your story.  I think it's something you'll have to make a decision on, because there's no right or wrong answer.  If you decide to write a series it might give you more freedom and more scope.  But you might like the fact that a long novel will have a definite end. 

    All I know is that my preference is for a long series of long novels - as long as they're good, of course!

    Good luck with your decision smile

    1. Laura Schneider profile image88
      Laura Schneiderposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      More brilliant insight from Lady Wordsmith! This is such good advice. I think I now know why my book never caught a publisher's eye for more than a second.

  4. Cardisa profile image88
    Cardisaposted 10 years ago

    I believe, as I have also learned that if the story is one "story" with one theme than you do a novel. If the characters take on a different theme than it's another story which would mean a series. I hope that makes sense.

    If you are writing a story about John, how he meets a girl and they end up getting married, no matter how long the story is, it should be one novel/story.

    Then you are still writing about john but this time he goes to war and his marriage breaks up and he loses one leg and it's all about him and the war. This would be a sequel

    John becomes a zombie is another sequel. Now I think I made more sense...lol

    1. ThompsonPen profile image64
      ThompsonPenposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      thanks for your advice! It's more of a john has to find this piece to the puzzle and do this with it, now he's got to move on to the next piece - there's about four pieces! I like your example smile

    2. Cardisa profile image88
      Cardisaposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      You are welcome. Then maybe it's four stories you have there. I would say each piece of puzzle represents a separate theme. If you add new characters for each story it's even better. Make each piece reads like a different story.

    3. Laura Schneider profile image88
      Laura Schneiderposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Excellent analysis of the different types of books and conditions! Thanks for writing this--I'm printing this answer out for my own reference files. I didn't realize I had the same question. (Love the 'zombie sequel'... when's that one due out? LOL)

    4. Cardisa profile image88
      Cardisaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      lol....I may just write that one myself...lol

  5. M. T. Dremer profile image87
    M. T. Dremerposted 10 years ago

    This all depends on your end game. Do you intend to publish it as a series of novels, or short stories? You're absolutely right that readers will be intimidated by a thick book, but it's important to know that both agents and publishers will also be intimidated by it. I spent eight years writing a 230,000 word fantasy novel, only to get told by an agent that it was too big to market. There are books of that length on the market, but very few people in the industry will take a chance on one unless you already have publishing credentials. I would recommend doing some research on your genre and seeing what the typical word length is and shooting for that. If your book is actually the equivalent of like two or three books for that total, then I would highly recommend breaking it up.

    1. Laura Schneider profile image88
      Laura Schneiderposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      M. T. Dremer, you bring up many good points! I never thought the publisher would be turned off by something out-of-the-norm by a newbie writer. Stephen King gets away with anything, but newbies should research, keep it simple and standard. Brilliant!

  6. Pennypines profile image59
    Pennypinesposted 10 years ago

    I find that following a family through its generations via a series of novels is more acceptable, but each book has to be complete, with its own beginning and ending.  That might be a little difficult to accomplish, so I am just submitting an opinion.

    1. Laura Schneider profile image88
      Laura Schneiderposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Pennypines, we're all just submitting opinions--no need to apologize. Love your point about each book having to be complete, with its own beginning and ending! So many good comments on this question thread--thanks for commenting, too! Cheers!

  7. tmbridgeland profile image81
    tmbridgelandposted 10 years ago

    Partly this also depends on if you are a well-known author or not. Publishers are leery about publishing a hugh book from an unknown writer. A way to split the difference is to offer it both ways and see which flies.

    1. Laura Schneider profile image88
      Laura Schneiderposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      OH! Great idea--offering it both ways! I don't think anyone else has brought that up yet. How practical! Thanks for the comment (my wheels are spinning now).

  8. J. Biaza profile image59
    J. Biazaposted 10 years ago

    I love reading.  For me the idea that another book awaits be is too much to bear.  I read the first book even faster.

    However, I have also read books where the writer really did not need to break up a story, and it only made the store go on and on. 

    It does seem writers these days make their books into series.  Sort of pre-selling for the next book…they get you hooked on book one, then you just have to buy and read book two or three. 

    Either way, I am going to read and read…to your success with your novel.

    1. Laura Schneider profile image88
      Laura Schneiderposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Hear, hear! To your success with your novel or series or whatever you decide to make of it.

      There is a wealth of information and guidance in these comments; thanks for asking the question--I've learned a lot, too! Maybe I'll get my first book out!

  9. lone77star profile image75
    lone77starposted 10 years ago

    Some readers love their beloved story to go on and on. That's because the skills of the author make the story so readable.

    And some stories are so painful to read that even a one-page short story would be too long.

    I loved the first third of "Stranger in a Strange Land," but then the story bogged down for me. I loved the first half of Heinlein's "Number of the Beast," but it too bogged down. And then I read Hubbard's "Battlefield Earth" which was huge, even with a tiny font size. Most paperbacks are usually 400-500 pages (some even less), but this one was well over a thousand, and I loved it right to the end. I wanted it to be even longer.

    Publishers usually don't publish long first novels. Economically, they are a risk. They take up the same amount of room as 2, 3 or 4 normal-sized novels on the book store shelf. And it's hard to charge more for the larger book, especially if the author is unknown.

    If you self-publish, then this is less of a problem.

    A series can be a good thing, especially if the first novel is compelling. You can make each book an event, like the release of each Harry Potter story, or each Twilight book.

    1. Laura Schneider profile image88
      Laura Schneiderposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      lone77star, so many good points you bring up--and I agree with them all, though I'd never put the thoughts together so succinctly before. You bring up a unique point about self-publishing being an option, too! I think that's what I need to do...


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