I want to write a song

  1. Butterflyandherro profile image65
    Butterflyandherroposted 14 months ago

    I want to write a song

    The moment before heart explosions: I wanna write a song expressing the moment right before he comes out with it. When your heart is beating so fast and you have to silence your breath patiently waiting for the joy that's about to overcome your whole body and consume you when he says those simple yet powerful words to you. The suspense is so quick: it's the wave before the crash, the sunbeams before the sunlight, numbness before the needle pricks in your sleepy foot. The moment before heart explosions. Enough said: I love you ?

  2. Jodah profile image90
    Jodahposted 14 months ago

    This is a very heartfelt piece, but is it really a question? It would be better in a hub, possibly as poetry. I have written two poems that have become songs so I understand the sentiment.