Can someone critique/edit my poem?
Feel free to add or change it however you choose.
Love like a rose.
My heart was broken, cold & colored blue. I'd nearly given up on things I thought I knew. One day I found a rose, like a rose my heart grew. I'd walk threw every thorn, there is nothing I wouldn't do. Slowly pull that rose close, its all that gets me through. Every second on I knew my love was true. There will never be a day that passes when I'm not in love with you.
Love Like a Rose.
My poor heart was left broken, cold & colored blue.
I'd almost given up on everything I knew.
One day I found a rose, and like that rose my heart grew.
From that very moment on I knew my love was true.
I'll walk through every thorn, there is nothing I won't do.
I pull that rose close to my heart, it's all that gets me through.
No day will ever pass again when I'm not in love with you.
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