Vanita Thakkar ~ A Response for Rainbows ~ Week 38

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   Vanita has written us another poem on the word prompt "Rainbows"
   
   https://hubpages.com/literature/The-World-Beyond-A-Poem
   
   Please start a discussion.   I haven't read this one yet, but I will as soon as I have time.
   
   Thanks.

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      ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Very nice expressions, Vanita.
      I especially liked, 'ocean of tears', 'furnace of fury', 'volcano of memories.'
      Brilliant-- Very nice response to the word prompt.
      Thank you Brenda, for sharing Vanita's wonderful poem.

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Chitrangada
         Thanks.
         
         She has some powerful lines in this one.

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         Vanita Thakkarposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks a lot, Chitrangadaji for your lovely comments.
         This is again an old poem - written some time in 2003.
         I thought it would match Brenda's word-prompt and posted it.
         Rains and rainbows have a special place in our love for Nature. I have written a lot on rainy season.
         Writing on HubPages has the advantage of elaborating with images, links and other features.
         Thanks, Brenda for your lovely word prompts and for sharing this one.

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            Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            Vanita
            No problem.

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   billybucposted 2 years ago

   It is a pleasure to watch Vanita grow as a poet and writer.  The growth is obvious, the talent increasing.

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      Vanita Thakkarposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks, Bill. Your encouragement is highly valued and appreciated.

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Her work is s pretty amazing.

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   Misbah786posted 2 years ago

   Bredz, Thanks a lot for sharing Vanita's work
   
   Hi Vanita, I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem. It is short but very meaningful. Beautiful response to the word prompt, 'Rainbows'. I believe, we all have that endless void within us where there is an ocean of tears and a storm of sighs. Only God knows about a person's inner feelings, which no one else can.
   
   We all go through a lot in life, but there must be a land where there is a rainbow beyond the desert of harsh realities. And I'm delighted you have it. Stay blessed and happy. Thank you for sharing.
   
   Blessings and Love to both of you!!

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      Vanita Thakkarposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks, Misbah for your beautiful and elaborate comments.
      Sincerely appreciate your visit and time.
      Best wishes and blessings to you, too.

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   Jodahposted 2 years ago

   A short but lovely poem, Vanity. I like the pics too. Thank you for sharing, Brenda.

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      Vanita Thakkarposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   Vanita
   Your poem, "The World Beyond - A Poem" expresses the feelings we hold deep inside ourselves filled with all the hurt & anguish we experience.
   
   For ourselves & others, we often carry pain of unresolved issues.
   
   Yet we also have memories which supersede those hurtful moments.
   
   It is our rainbow filled with love.
   
   Great write.

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      Vanita Thakkarposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks, Brenda.
      Reading responses to your word prompts is a great joy. I enjoy it very much.
      Thanks for your insightful comments and for your enthusiasm that keeps us all inspired and creative.
      Lots of love and best regards to you.

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