In search of medical help, a short story by Rosina

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years ago

   Please take some time to read Rosina’s short story.
   https://hubpages.com/literature/In-Sear … dical-Help
   Hello Rosina!
   Lovely story by you. I enjoyed reading the writing prompt inspired story.
   I love happy endings. Thank you for sharing.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Chitrangada, for posting the link to my story in the forum. I am glad to know you love happy endings and enjoyed the story. I love happy endings too. Thank you again.

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         VAVINAKUposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Rosina Ma'am,
         I just read your story about the doctor and patient. That was a beautiful story,  more so because because I am also a practicing doctor. Thank you for sharing that story.

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            surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

            I am happy you enjoyed this story, especially being a practicing doctor. My field of expertise is Computer Sc and Engg. But I like to think of diverse topics for my stories. Thank you so much for commenting, K.P.

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               VAVINAKUposted 2 years agoin reply to this

               Ditto from me ma'am- thank you for responding.

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years ago

   My pleasure, Rosina.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks Chitrangada.

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   Pamela99posted 2 years ago

   This is a good story Rosina. I love happy endings, and this story has a perfect ending. I enjoyed reading it.
   
   Thanks for posting Rosina's story Chitrangada.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I am delighted that you enjoyed the story and think that it has a perfect ending. I truly appreciate your comments, Pamela. Thank you so much.

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   Misbah786posted 2 years ago

   A very captivating and intriguing story with a beautiful ending. Thank you so much for sharing, Rosina. I enjoyed reading it very much.
   
   Thank you so much, Chitra Di, for sharing the link to Rosina's hub.
   
   Blessings and Love as always!!

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I am pleased, Misbah, that you enjoyed the story so much. Your comments are appreciated. Thanks a ton.
      
      Blessings and love to you as well.

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   Jodahposted 2 years ago

   A good response to one of Chill’s prompts, Rosina. Nice story.
   Thank you for sharing this, Chitrangada.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I am happy, John, that you like my response to Chill's eighth prompt. Thank you for your kind comment.

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   billybucposted 2 years ago

   The storyline is very familiar. I wrote a story very much like this a year ago.  Truth be told, I think you rushed it a bit. The story could have easily been expanded into two or three chapters and that would have allowed for more character development.  But a good story nonetheless, and I'm a sucker for happy endings.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Although I can't recall you writing a similar story last year, I guess you are probably right that I rushed a bit. I take your advice to allow for more character development. Nevertheless, I am glad you liked the story with the happy ending. Thank you, Bill, for your constructive comments.

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   Ankita Bposted 2 years ago

   This is a nice story, Rosina. I specifically liked how you have described the wilderness in the beginning. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I am delighted, Ankita, that you enjoyed this story. Thank you for stopping by and pouring in generous comments. I really appreciate that.

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   vidsagsterposted 2 years ago

   A very  interesting short story Rosina. The happy ending added a charm to the story. A god response to Chill's prompt. I enjoyed reading it.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I am pleased that you enjoyed the story with the happy ending. I appreciate your comments, Vidya. Thank you so much.

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   Peggy Wposted 2 years ago

   Thanks Chitrangada for sharing Rosina's story.  That doctor was kind as was the truck driver that got them to the city for medical treatment.  The ending was a happy one for the newly formed family.

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks Peggy for taking the time to read and comment. I hope you enjoyed the story. Yes, I love happy endings for my stories. Thank you again.

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