The whispers

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   VampireAliceposted 9 years ago

   The whispers come and go but never seem to vanish.
   The whispers come and go but never seem to sound.
   The whispers are all around me, I cant make them stop.
   the whispers control my thoughs, my moves , my being.
   the whispers have stopped for the night only to begin again
   in the morniing at dawn.
   
   
   
   It never ends for me

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      VampireAliceposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      its a poem of mine i just wanted to get my work out.
      but,  thanks for the comments

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      cosetteposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      cool. assuming the persona is a great technique. i did that with my bunny when he "wrote" stuff on Hubpages once upon a time...welcome aboard Alice!

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         VampireAliceposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you so much

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   zampanoposted 9 years ago

   er... might be the wind or just a draught...
   Inspect your windows and other openings and eventually, seal them better.
   If you have an air conditioning device, you sure found your whisperer.

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   lyricsingrayposted 9 years ago

   ya...um...maybe more air, better ventilation

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   zampanoposted 9 years ago

   Ah... Do they speak (whisper) in thongs ?

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      VampireAliceposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Its just a poem of mine dont take this seriously,
      although i take my writhing very seriously.
      I become the person.

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   zampanoposted 9 years ago

   And it would be indeed a nice start (or end) for a fiction suspense novel.

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   Crazdwriterposted 9 years ago

   repost it as a hub VampireAlice...then you can get your work out there more
   welcome to hubpages

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      lyricsingrayposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      good advice. and welcome

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      VampireAliceposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      thanks

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         VampireAliceposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         i have posted my first hub i will post more

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            Crazdwriterposted 9 years agoin reply to this

            woohoo it always feels good when you post your first one. but wait until you hit 50 and then 100...phew it's a rush

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      Justine76posted 9 years agoin reply to this

      ditto     forums fade away. hubs last.

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   donna bamfordposted 9 years ago

   I like this.  I think I sort of know what you mean.  i have
   something similar but I am not sure it is what you are talking about.  Nicely written.  I shall readd more.

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      VampireAliceposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      thanks your all awesome thanks for reading there are more on my page

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   Mrsincadosposted 9 years ago

   Rather interesting, it's always nice to discover something new.

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   dyonderposted 9 years ago

   really like this, thanx 4 sharin

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    donotfearposted 9 years ago

    Based on my observation this sounds like auditory hallucinations, which are okay, as long as they aren't giving commands.
    
    Over analyzing again. Where's the Prozac?

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