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  1. Tranita profile image59
    Tranitaposted 8 years ago

    "Sometimes you regret the things you do"

    Yeah, that's what some girls say, they tell me,

    "that's what happens when you make that one dreadful mistake,

    you want to turn back but it's way too late."

    They say it could happen to anyone, "Oh no not me"

    But it did, that's why she's got to make a choice,

    to keep or get rid.

    She can choose, maybe door one or door two,

    let die or let live, but either way she has to get through,

    something's got to give.

    A choice she'll make looking down memory lane,

    taking a look back through the hour glass at her past,

    and what caused this mistake.

    She said "I loved him, he said he loved me too."

    But I know that's what they say to get in your head.

    "He asked me how much? So I showed him my bed."

    So that's why a crib's in the corner of the room.

    I asked her "How old were you?"

    She explained "I'm 16 now, that was nine months ago."

    Cradling an infant in her arms

    she looked nothing more than 12 years old.

    The mistake she'd made could not account for all the pain she felt

    before and after her babies long awaited birth.

    "I love this child and always will,

    even though his father doesn't love me still.

    I made the mistake when I laid with him."

    One final question I had to cut loose

    "Is that a mistake, that there in your arms?"

    She said "No, God put him here to keep me warm,

    he's a part of me and helps me to go on.

    He's no mistake this child of mine,

    his birth a memory I'll keep in mind.

    No, not a mistake, after nine months I carried him,

    I couldn't let him go, couldn't give him away.

    He'll always be, in my heart he'll stay."

    Cradling an infant in her arms, she looked now no more then 12 years old, nine months was long hard labor, she had suffered true.

    A child at 16 a mistake I never knew,

    but she'll make other mistakes and

    this one she must get through.

    "His father Yes, but him No way,

    I've made bigger mistakes and this one worth it,

    no delay."

    1. SomewayOuttaHere profile image60
      SomewayOuttaHereposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      summed it up......

    2. blackreign2012 profile image63
      blackreign2012posted 8 years agoin reply to this

      this is hott I liked it

  2. Cagsil profile image80
    Cagsilposted 8 years ago

    I would say that you should have made a hub out of it, instead of posting it in the forum. hmm

    However, Welcome to HubPages.

    1. Tranita profile image59
      Tranitaposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      i did

  3. TheGlassSpider profile image69
    TheGlassSpiderposted 8 years ago

    I would say that since she posted it in the forum, that probably indicates that she would like us to "talk" with her about it.

  4. Cagsil profile image80
    Cagsilposted 8 years ago


  5. Cagsil profile image80
    Cagsilposted 8 years ago

    Very good. Congratulations on the publication of a hub. Nicely done. smile

    1. Tranita profile image59
      Tranitaposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      been posting all day. got my second follower by posting a forum. cant post a link so i just do it this way.

      1. Rochelle Frank profile image95
        Rochelle Frankposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Give it some time. Keep reading; keep posting and comment on other peoples' hubs. It can be a slow process, but success does grow.

        1. Tranita profile image59
          Tranitaposted 8 years agoin reply to this

          Thanks for the advice. I've been online for 7 hours lol. I really like it though

  6. cupid51 profile image69
    cupid51posted 8 years ago

    This is a very nice and thought provocative poem, must be saved as a hub so that other people can read it. Thanks for the great work.

    1. Tranita profile image59
      Tranitaposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks. it is a hub and many more

  7. sameerk profile image61
    sameerkposted 8 years ago

    Useful hub

  8. kmackey32 profile image68
    kmackey32posted 8 years ago

    I dont understand why many should be writting a hub but instead post in the forums.. Do they do this by mistake?

    1. Tranita profile image59
      Tranitaposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      i did both.

  9. Robert A. Harris profile image61
    Robert A. Harrisposted 8 years ago

    Powerful stuff, I like it.. Good job!

    1. Tranita profile image59
      Tranitaposted 8 years agoin reply to this



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