A WISH TO THE SKY- A poem
The city went black
On a cold yet breezy night
Off we walked
To view the theme of the night sky
The moon hid behind the clouds
Like it was aiming to give us a surprise
With just one star
It was a mysterious yet beautiful night
Soon, to our delight
Something popped up afar
Almost out of sight
Like another star it glowed
Like another wish it shined
Believing it’s a shooting star
I asked for a wish
To my revelation
Even more showed up
Like the sun it rose
Amidst the green
Wishing and wishing
My wish list came blank
With even more popping up
Filling the sky
Enhancing the beauty of the night
An hour passed
The sky went empty again
Like it once was
All the weird thoughts
Ended in the dawn
Figuring out what it was
The wish lanterns
Which hopefully would fulfill my wishes
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Comments
AUTHORThankyou Shubhangi
:)....Have a great day...:)
Lovely poem with beautiful imagery :) thank you!
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Eiddwen ,
thankyou for the read and comment.
im glad you liked it.:)
Thank you so much for sharing this gem;I now look forward to so many more by you.
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
- AUTHOR
Thankyou so much Christy.....:)
What a lovely poem!
- AUTHOR
:)....I'm on my way with the wish lantern making
You are welcome. I do like your poem and the idea of wish lanterns is great.
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Fitnezz jim,
Thankyou for the read and comment......i tried my level best to portray the image that i saw......im really glad you liked it.:)
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suzzycue,
Thanks for the read and comment.
i'll make sure that my next article would be on the making of the wish lanterns.....after all what else are friends for....:)..its a pleasure to get comments like these....im glad you liked it....:)
Wow, what a well portrayed image: wishes rising, flickering dream stars in the night.
Awww!! That is what I need wish lanturns. Will you write a hub on how to make them. That would be great and send one off for me. A beautiful poem and I love the pictures. Well Done!!!
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