I'd like to receive feedback on my short story: The Last Week.

  1. Diego Esperante profile image82
    Diego Esperanteposted 8 months ago

    It's one of my first Hubs and I'd like to hear what more people (aside from family and friends) think about it. Leaving link below.
    http://hubpages.com/literature/The-Last-Week
    P.S.: I'd also appreciate it if you checked out the rest of my work. Thank you very much.

    1. BumblelyBee profile image81
      BumblelyBeeposted 8 months ago in reply to this

      Cool, I like the story. It would be interesting to know what happens next and if the character ever stopped having so much hate and why he hates Jews so much and if he'd ever change his mind and become accepting of other cultures and how he's going to be with no money or job.

      1. Diego Esperante profile image82
        Diego Esperanteposted 8 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you. There's really not much point in going any further in time, since the story itself explains the period of time, but I appreciate the feedback.
        P.S.: He's probably still an ass, just slightly less.

 
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