I'd like feedback on my Hub:

  1. Gami Rina profile image72
    Gami Rinaposted 3 weeks ago

    I  proofread this and submitted it twice already. I already got tips for it from the community but I still can't get through!!! please help!!!
    My visit to Libearty bear sanctuary - the bears's stories (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!