I'd like feedback on my Hub: Hot Topics in Globalization

  1. Nicholas Mohollen profile image80
    Nicholas Mohollenposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Hot Topics in Globalization. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. lions44 profile image95
      lions44posted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Just read it.  Break up your paragraphs a little. You're cramming too much info into one paragraph. Lots of info. So add subtitles and briefly touch on each topic.  So for your opening paragraph, just speak about globalization overall; define it. Then move on to a specific topic.  Make an outline
      For example:
        1. Opening paragraph
         2. Brexit
         3. Effects of global trade on workforce

      Try that.  Make it your own, but sometimes all you need are 3 or 4 sentences per paragraph.  It is a heavy topic, so spacing out the details helps.

 
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