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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Usnea Lichen

  1. Elsie Hagley profile image82
    Elsie Hagleyposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Usnea Lichen. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. MGWriter profile image70
      MGWriterposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      Elise

      I like the bullets you have used in your article.  Perhaps you could make a paragraph out of like subjects.  I use a word-processing tool.  I know Hubpages uses one also.

      1. Elsie Hagley profile image82
        Elsie Hagleyposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

        Thanks for replying.
        Could you please explain what you mean by "Paragraph out of subjects". I don't understand.
        I have an iMac what is a word-processing tool? feeling a little dumb.
        Sorry.

  2. MGWriter profile image70
    MGWriterposted 5 weeks ago

    Elise,

    The article has great potential and will work well for you.  Please do not feel anything but pride.  As writers we wear our emotions on our shirt-sleeve.  When I was talking about sentence to paragraph I was speaking of the number of one line comments.  Putting some of them together in a paragraph. 

    I also use a Mac.  I have a tool called Microsoft Word.  It can be purchased under Microsoft on the web.  I also use a specific writing tool Grammarly.com.  I have found this to be the most useful checking sentence structure.  I like Grammarly gives advice and is not judgmental.

    Marsha

    1. Elsie Hagley profile image82
      Elsie Hagleyposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      Thanks for replying. I appreciate it.
      Have a nice weekend.

 
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