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  1. The Red Whistler profile image60
    The Red Whistlerposted 8 years ago

    Any suggestions or comments on my writings would be aprreciated. What do I do?

  2. thranax profile image50
    thranaxposted 8 years ago

    Well the Hub Itself is nice. I personally don't like reading things like that, too deep for me. It reminds me of this song honestly:

    Pain- Three Days Grace
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=otZdiO0q6pU

    I am not sure if that is good feedback or not, but it's all I have.

    ~thranax~

  3. WHoArtNow profile image84
    WHoArtNowposted 8 years ago

    Its an interesting piece (and I'm with Tharax, its not my kind of article) and the writing is good, layout works, some good images.

    The only thing I'd say against it is the concept, its very personal (which I'm totally fine with) but maybe too personal.

    I feel like I need to know a lot more about you to fully understand it! I suppose this could be a good thing though, some people will be intrigued and what to read your future hubs!

 
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