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New Hubber, Would Great Appreciate Any and All Feedback

  1. Burto profile image75
    Burto
    3 posts
    Joined: 2 months ago
    Hubs: 9
    Followers: 8

    Well, I just joined a few days ago and I've put a few hubs up. I was looking for any and all feedback whether it would be good or bad. Anything I can improve, could you connect, things of that sort. I would greatly appreciate help on how to improve my writing.

                                                       Thank you,
                                                                 Robert(Burto)

    Posted 2 months ago
  2. Jackson Riddle profile image77
    Jackson Riddle
    434 posts
    Joined: 3 months ago
    Hubs: 8
    Followers: 48

    Burto wrote:

    Well, I just joined a few days ago and I've put a few hubs up. I was looking for any and all feedback whether it would be good or bad. Anything I can improve, could you connect, things of that sort. I would greatly appreciate help on how to improve my writing.

                                                       Thank you,
                                                                 Robert(Burto)

    No worries, I'll head on over.

    Posted 2 months ago
  3. Burto profile image75
    Burto
    3 posts
    Joined: 2 months ago
    Hubs: 9
    Followers: 8

    Please help!

    Posted 2 months ago
  4. thranax profile image97
    thranax
    2096 posts
    Joined: 2 years ago
    Hubs: 46
    Followers: 323

    Your hubs are fine if you just want to have your content read. But none of it is search friendly. None of it is aimed at ads/money making. This means you won't make any money off that content. You will though get a few views now and then and maybe some good comments on your work.

    ~thranax~

    Posted 2 months ago
  5. TINA V profile image86
    TINA V
    169 posts
    Joined: 2 months ago
    Hubs: 23
    Followers: 80

    I suggest that you use pictures related to your hub to attract readers.  You can also “add capsules” to let you earn more.  You can find the capsules such as links, amazon, additional photo or text, etc. at the upper corner of the page when you start to do your hub. Welcome to hubpages!

    Posted 2 months ago
  6. Dame Scribe profile image97
    Dame Scribe
    2365 posts
    Joined: 13 months ago
    Hubs: 179
    Followers: 382

    I read your Whiskey girl hub. As it's a personal Hub, I would add, personal relationship and friendship to your tags. It's well written, laid out well but needs pictures or designs of some sort to add visual appeal. Welcome to HubPages smile

    Posted 2 months ago
  7. prettydarkhorse profile image95
    prettydarkhorse
    3271 posts
    Joined: 3 months ago
    Hubs: 123
    Followers: 311

    Burto wrote:

    Well, I just joined a few days ago and I've put a few hubs up. I was looking for any and all feedback whether it would be good or bad. Anything I can improve, could you connect, things of that sort. I would greatly appreciate help on how to improve my writing.

                                                       Thank you,
                                                                 Robert(Burto)

    I read walk of shame and you are good, simple and clear, just add some visuals on it...

    Posted 2 months ago
 
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