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What do you think of this poem? I wrote it myself.

  1. pand4 profile image60
    pand4posted 4 years ago

    http://s2.hubimg.com/u/7300541.jpg
    I love you oh so much
    That my heart craves your touch
    Every second of the day
    I think of your ways
    The way you kiss my forehead
    And the way you make my cheeks get red
    The way you hold me close
    And the way you nudge my nose
    But most of all when I look into you eyes
    I see our love and a future full of bright blue skies


    I wrote this for my boyfriend.

  2. pand4 profile image60
    pand4posted 4 years ago

    When I look into *YOUR* eyes. Correction meant to put your eyes instead of you eyes lol

  3. Globetrekkermel profile image63
    Globetrekkermelposted 4 years ago

    Playful and beautifully written.NIce!

    1. pand4 profile image60
      pand4posted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Thank  you! He loved it smile

  4. Thelma Alberts profile image85
    Thelma Albertsposted 4 years ago

    Beautiful!

    1. pand4 profile image60
      pand4posted 4 years ago in reply to this

      thank you so much! smile

  5. Tusitala Tom profile image81
    Tusitala Tomposted 4 years ago

    Sounds good to me, Panda4

    1. pand4 profile image60
      pand4posted 4 years ago in reply to this

      thank you!!!

     
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