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True loves Never Dies:

  1. Darknlovely3436 profile image38
    Darknlovely3436posted 8 years ago

    Throughout the years,
    with all my affairs
    I thought, that I have gone
    On with my life
    But it was all lies.

    Always thinking of you'
    Right out of the blues!
    Why can I forget the past;
    And forget that Love
    I once had for you;

    I have been in relationship;
    Even got married twice,
    But,your constant present
    Always, seem to be wavering
    In my life;

    Why can I forget the past and you!
    And set the memories of you free!
              and
    This constant yearning for you
    Will onlly contributed to hurt, and
    a degree of celibacy
    Can you see!

    Just set my heart Free:
    Darknlovely 3436.

    1. apeksha profile image60
      apekshaposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      Nice poems definatly true love never dies...

      1. packerpack profile image60
        packerpackposted 8 years ago in reply to this

        Well maybe true love never dies but what if both were truely in love but due to some unavoidable condition they had to separate. One has compromised with the situation and the other one is still waiting???

        1. apeksha profile image60
          apekshaposted 8 years ago in reply to this

          Loving is not only to get the person..
          love is war u have to face so many things..very few people gets true love and so then get married..
          But u r compromising its bad n if waiting who cant understand ur values is too bad...
          thats why love never dies..in most in our heart..

  2. Dame Scribe profile image62
    Dame Scribeposted 8 years ago

    why is it posted in the forum? hmm post it as a hub would be  better since Hubs are for public viewing.

  3. aniketgore profile image58
    aniketgoreposted 8 years ago

    Nice poem as Dame suggested make it a hub.

  4. MarisPublication profile image58
    MarisPublicationposted 8 years ago

    I feel the pain, I too have lost love. Poetry.com and allpoetry.com is an excellent site to visit and express your deepest thoughts. Heartfelt

  5. Kitchen_Witch profile image59
    Kitchen_Witchposted 8 years ago

    I like the poem.
    Thank you for sharing

  6. Darknlovely3436 profile image38
    Darknlovely3436posted 8 years ago

    Thank a lot you guys,I try to keep in contact with him daily,
    but it's not the same.

 
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