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Onomatopoeia ~ the poem

  1. DJ Funktual profile image82
    DJ Funktualposted 9 years ago

    This will be an open poem to be added to or by anyone, one line at a time using at least one Onomatopoeia.

    Onomatopoeia ~  is a word or a grouping of words that imitates the sound it is describing, suggesting its source object, such as "click," "bunk", "clang," "buzz," or animal noises such as "oink", "slurp", or "meow".

    LET'S BEGIN

    I got a car, a car that goes vroom,

  2. ProCW profile image81
    ProCWposted 9 years ago

    I hope that it's vroom never goes boom!

  3. SparklingJewel profile image77
    SparklingJewelposted 9 years ago

    Like the storm last night that thundered its doom on my room  (Is that right?)

    1. DJ Funktual profile image82
      DJ Funktualposted 9 years agoin reply to this

        yeah.  sorta.

      I think I just started us off with a bad line. 

      NEW LINE:

      When I was a kid, Batman's punches went POW!

      1. Misha profile image78
        Mishaposted 9 years agoin reply to this

        When I was a kid, WTF is Batman I did not know!

      2. SparklingJewel profile image77
        SparklingJewelposted 9 years agoin reply to this

        But when I grew up, punches became growls (from the faces that got them!)

        ??? (any better?) Am I suppose to rhyme with the end of your line?

  4. profile image40
    nannyboposted 9 years ago

    will it end i hope so soon

  5. Mark Knowles profile image60
    Mark Knowlesposted 9 years ago

    Kapow ! went the punches.......

  6. topstuff profile image61
    topstuffposted 9 years ago

    I got it fixed now it goes smooth.

  7. DJ Funktual profile image82
    DJ Funktualposted 9 years ago

    beep beep!
    who got the keys to the jeep?
    vroom!

 
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