Let's Write A Poem Together! Line by Line,

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   WordWielderposted 15 years ago

   Thanks kimback for the inspiration to do this with your last topic.... Simple rules: Every two lines have to rhyme, the next two lines have to rhyme as well but be different from the first lines. Be creative and make it fun!  I'll start with the first two lines to give it a sense of structure.
   
   Beneath the starry canopy lay endless stretch of shore,
   Some distant, shrouded memory- a place I'd seen before,

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      AshleyVictoriaposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Your face was so familiar yet seemingly so close,
      You placed your hand upon my breast, your loving, lethal dose.

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         Darknlovely3436posted 15 years agoin reply to this

         Am I under arrested?
                  Or are you putting me to the test,
                  Your eyes spear through my soul,,
                  And made my trembling lips,
                  Just.......................unfold.

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      vichi12345seetuseposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      a few line of my poem..
      "when days are long and nights are dark u gave me strength u gave me power.....
      vichi..
      Car Insurance

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      johnhardposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      hey..........this is an great idea....writing poem together yuppi
      this thread is nice
      thanx
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      john
      Drug Rehab Facilities

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      rider21posted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Many types of cancer produce large amounts of EGFR. So drugs are being developed to target these receptors, in the hope that this might slow their growth.
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      Rider21
      Divorce Lawyer

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      Miss Mposted 15 years agoin reply to this

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         nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         And you aren't very funny.

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      gascamillaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Your face was so familiar yet seemingly so close,
      You placed your hand upon my breast, your loving, lethal dose.

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      Handy mateAUposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Your face was so familiar yet seemingly so close,
      You placed your hand upon my breast, your loving, lethal dose.

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      bloodbornetrainingposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Cool

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      RothDaviesLLC1posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Your face was so familiar yet seemingly so close,
      You placed your hand upon my breast, your loving, lethal dose.

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   WordWielderposted 15 years ago

   Basking in all the ecstacy, she trembles at the brush
   Like lovers in a fantasy, we embrace and feel the rush,

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   AshleyVictoriaposted 15 years ago

   But just like every fated love, the ending isn't bright,
   Cupid's arrow can't save their love for he (like always) leaves in the night.

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      marknikholasposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Every dark night is followed by a bright sunny day. So, patience and attention is required and things will be fruitful in near future.
      
      mark
      
      Divorce Lawyer

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   Lisa HWposted 15 years ago

   Yet in the light the following day,
   To thoughts of her his mind did stray.

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   AshleyVictoriaposted 15 years ago

   On earth, together they could not be,
   but in another realm they were forever we.

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      catrina123posted 15 years agoin reply to this

      On earth we are together live in a house,
      after ending we are live in sky forever.
      
      catrina

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   WordWielderposted 15 years ago

   Wherein here lies the tragedy: lovers lost in world's apart,
   Yet passion spans both realities and reunites them soul and heart

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   Lisa HWposted 15 years ago

   While longing's wistful memory,
   and thoughts of things not meant to be

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   chana45posted 15 years ago

   A touch from your lips sweet as could be
           took me past today into eternity

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   AshleyVictoriaposted 15 years ago

   Where the heavens are endless and the ocean drifts by,
   forever in a stream of love, longing, and the star speckled sky.

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    WordWielderposted 15 years ago

    Crossing o'er heaven's canopy to seek his angel's face,
    Falling through earthly gravity, he lives again for her embrace,

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    mandybeauposted 15 years ago

    The warm breath apon him, he will never forget, neither past or present, he will show no regrets.,

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    She’s here, not here, just out of reach, separated by a thought
    So real but so intangible – almost a dimension forgot

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    Mighty Momposted 15 years ago

    Forever etched yet nebulous, as written by a ghost
    Her memory fades, diaphanous, dissolving, melting... lost

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    but found again on the brow of my garden's memory
    dreaming in sepia, among roses and rosemary

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Are they veils of make believe that hide her thoughts from mine
    Or memory’s failing, flowing stream that leaves just naught behind?

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    Mighty Momposted 15 years ago

    His senses roused to moments fair, he breathes in mem'ries deep
    Her dusky scent on dusk's cool air enticing him toward sleep

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    Mighty Momposted 15 years ago

    His senses roused to moments fair, he breathes in mem'ries deep
    Her dusky scent on dusk's cool air enticing him toward sleep

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    AshleyVictoriaposted 15 years ago

    And in his dreams the two are one,
    With thoughts brighter and dreamier than the setting sun.

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    thranaxposted 15 years ago

    Running though the park's rustling leaves in dusk light,
    love and rejoice keep his warm big heart bright.
    
    ~thranax~

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    Mighty Momposted 15 years ago

    A world apart, she's restless, listening
    Cruel dagger drops on hot cheeks glistening

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    thranaxposted 15 years ago

    He's trapped in a hell yelling for her so,
    running quicker now only defense is a quiver and bow.
    
    ~thranax~

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Will the two worlds collide at all or ever more stay thus
    On parallel paths with just no hope of e’er uniting us?

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    thranaxposted 15 years ago

    But hope isn't given up easy even in the cold ice,
    the dream can be achieved if you don't fear the price.
    
    ~thranax~

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    Eaglekiwiposted 15 years ago

    For what would you do  ,if you knew you couldnt fail

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    Mighty Momposted 15 years ago

    Good question, that! What lovers wouldn't give
    To reunite in death ...or e'er apart to live?

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    Eaglekiwiposted 15 years ago

    Each day brings the same , or does it just seem that way ,for if we look very closely , closer still ,
    we begin to see
    That the nothing ever remains the same

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    Rik Ravadoposted 15 years ago

    [Reminder of the rules: Every two lines have to rhyme, the next two lines have to rhyme as well but be different from the first lines.]

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    Rik Ravadoposted 15 years ago

    He wakes at last from a dream of her lips upon his own
    He slips into her memory but find himself alone

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    WordWielderposted 15 years ago

    Transfixed by all her pleasantries, this angel, goddess, queen,
    Affixed in shrouded mystery, is this phantom, lover's scene,

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Mysterious shrouds that do divide one world from the next
    One of real longing and the other just a jest?

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    Mighty Momposted 15 years ago

    Whose ache is lie, whose frailty?
    This mystery cloaks all reality

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    Leta Sposted 15 years ago

    For ache to end here in the desert; amid naked trees and scarred
        rough sand
    For ache to live beyond the river, this thirst, this quench--
        this rich-willed land
    
    Frailty?  Thy name is hope; thy dream woman, and mystery beyond
       that black dust of reality shared, stretch; yea, to the stars--
       to the heart of night, a sliver of hand, the feel of fright
    
    The ache     is to lie--drenched, sweet     and dream of oceans.

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    The Lonely Hubberposted 15 years ago

    Oh begone ache, begone! Begone and let me drown!
    Can't you see that my dreams have all but flown?

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    Leta Sposted 15 years ago

    Fly; verily, swiftly   away, escape   as the wings of a sparrow 
        beat against the pavement, dying.
    
    And when he,  looking up sees   naught but the naked eyes of   
        buildings swirling, lying,
    
        Surely goodness and love shall follow all my days   dream me
    
    Anew, as in the arms of a lover newly waking   before that 
        long night's fresh due.

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    and find a limb where you can rest from flight
    and sing to me again of a thousands moons in sight

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Your voice, your words, your touch - they’re so believable
    Where does imagination end with the intangible?

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    Alas, i cannot fathom the paradox, the divide
    i am left to trust what the heart speaks of inside

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Are these fixed, dividing lines just in the mind?
    Or are just they manmade walls that us do bind?

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    great walls of words that leave us asunder
    to the wind, to fire, our fate i surrender

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    And then he wakes up to the reckoning of his thought
    In my love, he always felt fraught

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Walls of words and walls of thought separate us
    Like Berlin’s Wall, we must destroy what divides us

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    Darknlovely3436posted 15 years ago

    NO,let us united, and converge, and figure out what make this
    Love thing,
    brings us all to our knees,
    Don't let our soul unfold, for
    an ounce of ........gold

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    For love is deeper than the unfathomable sea
    Deeper than the ridge that separates you from me

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    And so, we will have to drink the separting vastness
    
    We must abridge the ridge that creates this abyssness

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    Darknlovely3436posted 15 years ago

    Oh! My  let stop the madness!!!,
    take a step, away from that vast abyssness
    look around, can you see, life is worth living,
    Smell, the air, feel the sun, against your face,
    We all know that life isn't...........fair!

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    Mighty Momposted 15 years ago

    Two lovers' hearts ache longingly, across the vast abyss
    The wind, their only ally, wafts with echoes of a kiss

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    a kiss that smells of summertime and full moon
    but sadly, still only echoes that end so soon

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    Darknlovely3436posted 15 years ago

    but the lovers they smile, so sweetly as his lip gentle pull away
    from each other lips, and they eyes glue, on to each other, for a while,as the thunder roar in the sky;

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    Mighty Momposted 15 years ago

    Can love survive the autumn, and winter's icy hold?
    Keep reading as our lovers' fate slowly does unfold...

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    And unfold it will, this tale of love both sweet and bitter
    Like a favorite book, in our hearts we keep forever near

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