Ok Hubbers, lets write a poem together.

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   Sherbet Pennyposted 14 years ago

   Now poets and non poets, fellow hubbers, lets write a 40 line poem together, a hubbers in unity poem, and at the 40 line mark, I'll gather up all the lines and make a hubbers poetry hub out of them. This could be fun and hilarious with the end product.
   
   So whoever is up for it, write just one line, I don't care what its about, or how long(not too long though now be good) on any topic, emotion etc. Try not to read anybody else's so you won't be influenced, and when we have 40 lines, I'll knock them up together and see what we got, poetry straight from the hubbers mouths, or laptops in this case. I'll give the First line, then were off, hopefully lol. Goog-luck people.
   
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   The sun beams through the window and I sweat like a wild beast, typing with my broken fingers.

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      StormRyderposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      And as the words flow from my mind, the thought of you still lingers..

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      Mentalist acerposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      With an unbroken train of thought,telling myself that
      even grey has color.
      The neural connections in my mind becomeing
      a metallic treble.

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      MordechaiZoltanposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      thinking to myself, if only I could type with my toes the pain would not be so bittersweet

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      nikepick99posted 14 years agoin reply to this

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      BIGCSSHOPposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      The right side of the coin flips for me every time, whether it's yours or mine.

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      mailxpressposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      backward steps makes me move forward

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   Poppa Bluesposted 14 years ago

   Trying to untangle the thoughts and emotions captive in my heart

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      Pani Midnyte Odinposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Wondering why we ever had to part...

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         Freya Cesareposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         wondering why we ever had to meet

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   keizposted 14 years ago

   Dreams of you constantly haunt me and I can only type in a trance

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      Freya Cesareposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      The world turning upside and down but I still standing inside the same pain

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         blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         As my soul does weep within the morning rain.

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            rebekahELLEposted 14 years agoin reply to this

            watering the earth as it cleanses my pain.
            
            
            
            [office isn't open yet in CA]

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   Ohmaposted 14 years ago

   My mind is reeling thinking of our lost romance.

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   LeonJaneposted 14 years ago

   as I remember a time when your hands were in mine

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      LeighGBanksposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      the rain makes such a gentle sound as now i live six feet underground

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         roy dposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         Blood, sweat and tears from years gone by. Battles fought, spirit unknown.
         Fear misconceived, shattering dreams and schemes not yet known, and we cry, and wonder why, yet we continue to seek a path that will lead us from this life we live and the pain within. Little did I know that we need not search for what we seek, but choose instead the road less traveled that holds all the mysteries unraveled.
         
         By me; Royd

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            Sherbet Pennyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

            Hey Royd, the whole idea here is just one line please.

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               roy dposted 14 years agoin reply to this

               Got ya, delete it please.

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                  roy dposted 14 years agoin reply to this

                  I over read your instructions of just one line. My bag.

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                     roy dposted 14 years agoin reply to this

                     Fears misconceived, shattering dreams and schemes not yet known.

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                     Sherbet Pennyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

                     No problem Royd, this will be fun when put together, if we reach 40 lines, hopefully

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   theirishobserver.posted 14 years ago

   Gentle curse of love stroked my heart

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      rebekahELLEposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      cupid's arrow piercing the deepest part

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   russiangypsygirlposted 14 years ago

   Nothing stops me from falling, impaling my body on the blinding shards of your absence.

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   blondepoetposted 14 years ago

   Oh heck with the last few posts am unsure where to continue from.

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      Sherbet Pennyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Blondepoet, your not meant to continue, just throw in a line, I'm gona put them all together and see how messed up it is, for good oul fun.

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         blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         K Sherbs I am going to let it flow through

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            Sherbet Pennyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

            yaaaaaayy my favourite blonde

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               blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

               My cutest cyber space hunk.

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      LeonJaneposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      {I agree blondepoet, some of these lines are really off on another tangent! I guess Sherbet Penny will have to do some discretionary editing to make this poem flow}

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         Sherbet Pennyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         Yes it'll be a bit of work, fun though, the stranger the better

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   mikelongposted 14 years ago

   So many voices, and all so scattered; the medication is failing
   
   
   (my line for submission...not to be confused with a criticism)

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    QuirkyPearlposted 14 years ago

    my red heart balloon is trapped up a tree

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    HubblyBubblyposted 14 years ago

    Come the high  wind and set my soul free

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    blondepoetposted 14 years ago

    Lust ridden thoughts consume my mind,

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    What my heart desires im sure to find

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    blondepoetposted 14 years ago

    A fire burns deeply within my soul,

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    I help it burn with my shovel of coal

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    I sit all alone in the park on the grass.

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       As I pulled a prickle fair clean from my ass.

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    AEvansposted 14 years ago

    I look to the sky and asked myself why,

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    Moneyladyposted 14 years ago

    Some dreams are so close and then they die

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    blondepoetposted 14 years ago

    A solitary tear escapes from my eye,

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    upon this day I hear do vow

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       To dump my lover for Bessie the cow.

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    I will get new glasses and becareful were i sit

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    because crying hurts more than my prickly bit.

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       AEvansposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       OMG, Now that is hilarious!!!! lololollo

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    blondepoetposted 14 years ago

    I rip the blouse from my chest,

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       calpol25posted 14 years agoin reply to this

       and then i reveal my lovely third breast

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    I take off my wig and shrug my big shoulders

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Naked and beastly, my heart'eth does smoulder.

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    I hang up my drawers and expose my small boulder

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    I know theres a problem as im getting older

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    blondepoetposted 14 years ago

    I slip into the water to quench my desire,

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    and then i get out and go off to retire.

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    could this be simple or could this be sad, does this make me rude or just simply bad

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       I think your just a horny lad.

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          calpol25posted 14 years agoin reply to this

          Then definately im really bad

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    I can not believe that im a high flyer

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       calpol25posted 14 years agoin reply to this

       as i sit there before your logs on the fire

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    blondepoetposted 14 years ago

    As the fire dances upon my skin,
    I close my eyes and release my sin.

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       calpol25posted 14 years agoin reply to this

       I stand up and stare at the mirror so free
       I do my big dance that was expected of me.

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    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    

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    poetlorraineposted 14 years ago

    Seasons changing, love in the air, carried only by a soft gentle breeze

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       calpol25posted 14 years agoin reply to this

       How the blowing pollen does make me sneeze

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       My heart travels across the stormy seas.

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    We really are naughty this poem gets worse
    Would you dare us to give it a second verse.

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    poetlorraineposted 14 years ago

    as the smile on your face, brings me down to my knees

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       calpol25posted 14 years agoin reply to this

       My feet do give way and I fall 90 degrees

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          tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          
          
          this is funny !

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    This is such a story to tell one an other

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    dont tell your husband or even your mother.

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       AEvansposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Oh dear! lololo

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    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    don't tell your sister, your shrink or your lover

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Or they will say to you "Why should I bother?".

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          china manposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          Ha !!  bother and lover don't rhyme !  even though you got in ahead of me that time !

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             blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

             @#####*@@@!!!!! Cal threw me off track,
             With his three bazookas and a thorn in his crack.

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       china manposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       But come back soon and give me another

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    tantrum is loving our funny poem
    
    please keep your laughter and support flowing

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Sure !!

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       As to where this is going I aint really knowing.

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    russiangypsygirlposted 14 years ago

    Hah, guess I misunderstood, SP. I thought they were meant to go together so I just jumped off a point from your 'Wild Beast' which was awesome. Lol. Ok, so here's a completely random line and you can delete my other submission that was led by other hubbers into a very dark place.

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       Sherbet Pennyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       nah ye were on the right track these kids here have gone completly of the track

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          russiangypsygirlposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          Alright. We'll let the crazy kids have their fun... I think you should try this experiment again. Only make certain to emphasize at the beginning that no one is to read the other lines until you have composed a poem from them. THAT, my lad, would be funny!!

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          blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          I am sorry Sherbet I tried to keep it on the straight and narrow...

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    Oh aint awful it such a disgrace

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       That I have such an angelic face.

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       ladyjane1posted 14 years agoin reply to this

       my line came in perfectly after yours lol

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    ladyjane1posted 14 years ago

    there is a fine line between love and hate

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    its naughty but nice and in a dark place

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       What's your blow up doll doing in this nice place?

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       I wrap up my body with latex and lace

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    russiangypsygirlposted 14 years ago

    Alright. We'll let the crazy kids have their fun... I think you should try this experiment again. Only totally emphasize at the beginning that no one is to read the other lines until you have composed a poem from them. THAT, my lad, would be funny!!

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       Sherbet Pennyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       it was an experiment that went terribly wrong lol

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          russiangypsygirlposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          I would agree... Lol! It was such a fantastic idea. But, yes, terribly wrong..

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          tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          I think it went terribly right !

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             Sherbet Pennyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

             haha for some mabe lol

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                tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

                
                for me it's perfect. It made me laugh !

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    calpol25posted 14 years ago

    I dare not go further its shameful to place

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    ladyjane1posted 14 years ago

    I think we're gonna need a bigger boat

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       To keep my bitter sweet thoughts afloat.

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    so i just drift back to places long gone remembering faces and the words of our song

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       blondepoetposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       To keep my failing heart so strong.

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    RoseColonposted 14 years ago

    as we imagine the soft silky touch that reminds us be at ease

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       Isabelle22posted 14 years agoin reply to this

       The wind blows the raft through stormy black seas
       (funniest best thread I have read, tks )

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    AEvansposted 14 years ago

    I came back and it certainly made me smile and laugh , hehehehheeh

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    blondepoetposted 14 years ago

    
    Sherby for you
    Your thread is still going strong.

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       Sherbet Pennyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       BP, where would I be with out you haha thank you, I'm blushing

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          Nikkij504gurlposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          yea this is funny. hi im new (:

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