Wanna Critique My Hub(s)?

  1. Love Connoisseur profile image54
    Love Connoisseurposted 9 years ago

    I was hoping to get some input on my hubs - good, bad, or ugly. I figure who better to give me some much needed advice, than the experts? I would greatly appreciate it if you, my fellow hubbers, wouldn't mind taking a few minutes of your time to read my first two hubs and tell me what you think!

    Also, I think this thread would be an excellent opportunity for everyone. I see that anyone can post a new thread anytime they need a critique, however I thought one thread for all could work just as well!

    So those of you posting in the thread that wish to receive critiques, post with your reply that you would like some input!

    Have a hubtabulous day! wink

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  2. Whitney05 profile image82
    Whitney05posted 9 years ago

    I would consider breaking up the text into different capsules and adding a picture. Also on 'reconsider breaking up' you want to check the order of the capsules. The text capsule is underneath the comments. I would even consider an introduction on the other one. Other than that they look fine.

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