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Critique my hubs please?

  1. digitalladd profile image57
    digitalladdposted 8 years ago

    I just strated two weeks ago and would like to know what I'm doing right and wrong.

    Thanks for any comments,
    Lisa
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  2. Dame Scribe profile image61
    Dame Scribeposted 8 years ago

    I think you're doing great. I read the 5 free office adds .. I would recommend keepig your comments box at the end of the Hub. I thought the rest of it was adverts tongue n had to go back to finish reading, lol ..sorry...but writing is good and overall, great!

  3. digitalladd profile image57
    digitalladdposted 8 years ago

    Thanks I'll move my comments to the end like you suggested.

  4. AEvans profile image78
    AEvansposted 8 years ago

    I read a couple of articles myself and here is what I am finding on your articles. Missing pics, make certain that you add plenty of pics, you see an abundance of google advertisment but this makes the article look busy. When you get a chance write a little about yourself in your profile as believe it or not people do read it. smile

  5. digitalladd profile image57
    digitalladdposted 8 years ago

    AEvans- Thanks for your comments I'll try to find some more pictures to replaces some of the ads.

 
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