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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Spring Mix Salad with Homemade Dressing

  1. melissae1963 profile image88
    melissae1963posted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Spring Mix Salad with Homemade Dressing (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Shades-of-truth profile image86
      Shades-of-truthposted 2 years ago in reply to this

      Sorry, melissae1963, but I am not able to view it.

      1. melissae1963 profile image88
        melissae1963posted 2 years ago in reply to this

        Yes, I realize that now. I don't know why Hubpages sent me a link to post that question if my post can't be seen.

  2. ThrashDD profile image61
    ThrashDDposted 2 years ago

    melissae1963, I would love to provide feedback for you but I'm not able to view it either...

    1. melissae1963 profile image88
      melissae1963posted 2 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you. Hubpages said they couldn't post my Hub and suggested I get help on this forum, but it does no good if no one can see it. I'll just continue to work on it.

      1. AliciaC profile image97
        AliciaCposted 2 years ago in reply to this

        Hi, melissae1963. I can see your hub now, although I couldn't earlier. I enjoyed reading it. The only problem that struck me was the Amazon capsule. You're trying to sell healthy snacks in a box in the capsule, but your hub is about homemade salad dressing and salads. Apart from the idea of healthy eating, the Amazon capsule doesn't seem to be applicable to your hub topic. That's my guess for what the problem might be.

        1. melissae1963 profile image88
          melissae1963posted 2 years ago in reply to this

          Yes, that is an excellent point. I may just delete that capsule and may put in a callout about making foods from scratch. Thanks.

  3. Nastya Bronnikova profile image59
    Nastya Bronnikovaposted 2 years ago

    Might not be a dealbreaker, but here's something that caught my eye. Have you considered tweaking the titles a little to make the structure of your hub more clear? For instance, you could try starting with a brief preface, then simpy naming each subsequent section after the respective step of the salad-making process ('Choosing the ingredients' - cue everything you have to say on the topic, 'Making the dressing' - etc.).

    1. melissae1963 profile image88
      melissae1963posted 2 years ago in reply to this

      Those are excellent points. I'm going to revise for organization. It might make it flow better. Thanks.

 
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