I'd like feedback on my Hub: When Silence Is Louder Than the Noise

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   MissCueposted 9 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub When Silence Is Louder Than the Noise. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      SheilaMilneposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      The Amazon modules for eye-shadow and vintage jewelry seem to have very little, if any, bearing on the subject.

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         MissCueposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         I agree with you on the Amazon link, although in the Amazon module my keyword quirry was "Shadow"  and makeup was the result.... I will change the keywords to find something more appropriate.  Thanks for taking the time to read it....

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            Phyllis Doyleposted 9 years agoin reply to this

            Hi Helen. The Amazon link has nothing to do with the word shadow in your poem. Maybe try a link to a book about poetry or 'self realization'?  This is another thing that prevent passing QAP - having unrelated product links.

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      Elsie Hagleyposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      I'm not sure on this one, but all your photos credits, when clicked on take you to your page on FaceBook,
      Would be interested if this is allowed.

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         MissCueposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         Hi Elsie,
         Thanks for taking the time to read my hubpage.  The pictures that are in my hub page were all done in hand by me.  The module requests source of the art which is by me.  I suppose I will check on the rules for that.  Thanks again.

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            Elsie Hagleyposted 9 years agoin reply to this

            That's fine, all the photos are yours, only it's the first time I have seen the person name linked to their facebook page, I was wondering if it was allowed.
            Have a nice day.

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            Phyllis Doyleposted 9 years agoin reply to this

            All you have to do is put your name in as the source. Directing the source to FaceBook may be one of the reasons the hub has not yet passed QAP.

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      Vagabond Laborerposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Your writing, like your poem, is very ethereal and hard to pin down (not necessarily all a bad thing!).  Perhaps if you gave examples of "Ethereal moments" more concretely it would hold the poem together a little bit more.
      I love the title, by the way.

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         MissCueposted 9 years agoin reply to this

         Hi Vagabond.....thanks for taking the time to read my hubpage.  I appreciate your input..... will try to figure out how to mix ethereal with concrete...and see what I come up with....lol.....take care!!! Helen

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      Phyllis Doyleposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Hi again, Helen. I would take out the bolding in your poem. Bold words should only be used for capsule sub-titles.
      
      Your link to Vintage jewelry does not relate to your poem hub. Again, find a product or quote that relates to the hub topic.
      
      Your opening image at the top is an Edgar Allen Poe quote and that should be noted in your source. The image was drawn by you, but the quote is Poe's.
      
      I do like your poem. It seems like a journey into Self, contemplating and reflecting. Very nice.

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