I'd like feedback on my Hub: Learn the Critical Aspects of Web Designing

  1. Kristy Bernales profile image60
    Kristy Bernalesposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Learn the Critical Aspects of Web Designing (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason Marovich profile image88
      Jason Marovichposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Welcome to HubPages.

      Understanding your hub content is difficult because the English grammar isn't exceptional.  It reads as if English is your second language and that's fine.  But passing QAP will be difficult without an improvement in the sentence structure and wording in the information you've provided.

      Keep at it.  You're not far off.

    2. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I agree with what Jason said. You've got the flow right but it is hard to understand. Do you know a native English speaker who could tweak it for you?

      Also, you should post a link to your image sources (in each photo module) and make sure you have permission to use them. If they are your own, then just put your name in the credit box.