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I'd like feedback on my Hub: 'Learning to Drive' A romantic story told in a way

  1. Leftmefeeling profile image59
    Leftmefeelingposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 'Learning to Drive'  A romantic story told in a way that reflects real life. Film review 2015 (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. innerspin profile image93
    innerspinposted 2 years ago

    Hello Leftmefeeling,

    You need to research Hubpages more to understand what is expected of a hub. Under 100 words is simply not enough. Go the learning center for advice, and read hubs by other people.

  3. FatFreddysCat profile image100
    FatFreddysCatposted 2 years ago

    ^^ What Innerspin said. This is waaaaayy too short.

  4. Leftmefeeling profile image59
    Leftmefeelingposted 2 years ago

    OK, thanks for the feedback, I only made it less than a 100 words because the counter kept going down so I presumed wrongly that it was like Twitter and you only had so much space to write your content.

    Thank you for the feedback, I will go and look at the FAQ's.

    Thanks for the response.

    1. gerimcclym profile image96
      gerimcclymposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I enjoyed reading your film review. Looks like an interesting film!
      To answer your question, the third paragraph appears to be one long run- on sentence. I encourage you to break it up into two or more sentences for the sake of clarity. I hope this helps.