I'd like feedback on my Hub: Emotional Intelligence - Why is it so Important?

  1. livingelysian profile image85
    livingelysianposted 24 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Emotional Intelligence - Why is it so Important?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Sue Adams profile image96
    Sue Adamsposted 24 months ago

    Hi Elysia,
    Good article. I only noticed a few things that could be improved.

    1st paragraph
    "achieve much success at in your work environment,..."

    paragraph "My Experience"
    "Not judging ..." needs a subject and a verb. Or cut out the sentence altogether, it is not necessary to apologise for saying that this woman had poor EI.

    Punctuation: several comas are missing when sentences begin with, for example:

    "The truth is, (coma) we spend most of our lives..."

    www.grammarly.com/‎ free spell check program deals with such punctuation errors very effectively.

    Paragraph: Key Points to Consider"

    . "Are physically healthier than others"
    I would just put: "Are physically healthy" so you don't put EI people on a pedestal.


    Is there a way to put a simple HP quiz capsule directly on the page, rather than having to leave the page to go to another quiz and then having to come back to report on results in the poll?

    If it still doesn't pass QAP, then I would either cut the amazon ad or... write 300 words about the book you are advertising. I believe those are the rules.

    Good luck with getting the hub featured.

  3. livingelysian profile image85
    livingelysianposted 24 months ago

    Thanks Sue!