I'd like feedback on my Hub: Dear Pepe the Great

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  1. honeyreyes profile image71
    honeyreyesposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub http://hubpages.com/relationships/Dear-Pepe-the-Great

    It's an open letter to a very important person in my life. I want it to be one of the Christmas gifts I am going to give him.

    This would mean so much to me if it passes the Quality Assessment Process as well as to him. I am sure it will make him extremely happy.

    What can I do to improve?

    Please send me feedback and I will sincerely appreciate it.

    Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image98
      theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      While I appreciate the sentiment behind this hub, it is not really the sort of piece HP is looking for, i.e. standalone articles that will attract external traffic. Is there a better place for you to publish this, as it is so personal? You could put it on Facebook, maybe?

      Have you used copyright free, Creative Commons licensed images?

      1. honeyreyes profile image71
        honeyreyesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks for the comment, I do appreciate it much. Yes I know it's a bit personal but I was hoping it can be featured here. I also had a bit of personal posts already featured here... so I was really hoping this one would too :-)
        If not, then yes maybe I will just need to publish it somewhere.


        I took the images from morguefile where it is free to use their pictures.

        Thank you so much theraggededge, I was worried no one would comment here.

        1. profile image0
          calculus-geometryposted 2 years agoin reply to this

          I think it's a lovely gesture to create a sort of online thank you card.  What about making a standalone webpage using something like wix.com or wordpress.com? You would at least have control over the formatting and make it look more like a card or letter.  HP's format is more for articles. And as raggededge says it's probably not going to pass QAP given its personal nature.  Best of luck with it!

          1. honeyreyes profile image71
            honeyreyesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            Thanks Calculus, I think I will also agree with you. Anyway I am very open and thus if it is not going to be publish I'll just have to write it on the traditional way: letter sent in snail mail smile

            Thank you for your comment

  2. psycheskinner profile image82
    psycheskinnerposted 2 years ago

    I don't understand who "Pepe the Great" is, and therefore do not understand what this hub is about.

    1. honeyreyes profile image71
      honeyreyesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Psycheskinner,

      this is supposed to be a letter to my friend Pepe smile

  3. WriteAngled profile image80
    WriteAngledposted 2 years ago

    I suggest you read the following section in the Learning Centre
    http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/publ … d_22732041

    1. honeyreyes profile image71
      honeyreyesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks WriteAngled for your suggestion! Now I understand why and how it wont be featured smile

  4. willmcwryter profile image60
    willmcwryterposted 2 years ago

    wow i read this and i can feel pepe the greats presence right here in my room it's giving me spine tingles.  don't give up!

    1. honeyreyes profile image71
      honeyreyesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks willmcwryter! Thanks that somehow lift me a bit about this smile

  5. RJ Schwartz profile image93
    RJ Schwartzposted 2 years ago

    This work is a collection of sentences and I have no idea of what Pepe even is.
    Perhaps your thoughts come like that, so you may consider making it into a poem.
    Your thoughts are also all over the place and unfocused, almost like you are trying to put everything you can into this piece of work.
    It has a lot of potential and I can feel your passion for the subject in the words.

    1. honeyreyes profile image71
      honeyreyesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks RJ,

      comments like yours is what I want. Something straightforward but with sense so I would really improve the way I write too smile

 
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