I'd like feedback on my Hub: 8 Things That Every Aspiring Music Producer Must Kn

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    Love Life365posted 23 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 8 Things That Every Aspiring Music Producer Must Know About. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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    Marisa Wrightposted 23 months ago

    You have two problems with this Hub.  One is that your English is just not good enough, I'm afraid.  HubPages' readers are mainly American and they expect to read articles written in fluent American English. 

    The other problem is that your Hub is far, far too general.  You say you're going to provide information on how to use DAWs - and then after a lot of general introduction, you tell people there are no books on the subject and they must do their own research!   So you are not being helpful to your readers at all. 

    Think about what your readers would really want to know and write about that - but first, improve your English, a LOT.

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    Love Life365posted 23 months ago

    OK thanks for replying . I will work on this smile

 
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