Hello, everybody! I just published my first hub.
Please give your feedback. =]
Adult hobbies at home
Also, I'm quite new here. Its only been a week.So, I would appreciate it if the critique isnt too 'harsh' :p
Your article is thin on helpful information; it's more just a list of hobbies and pastimes.
But, the bigger issue is English grammar. Here's just one example:
"Its meaningless, if people recognise alphabets and understand the words, but doesn't bother to read.At first, reading can be boring. However, once in a while you might enjoy it."
The first sentence is contorted and doesn't really contain any information. "Its" is wrong, should be it is or it's. "Doesn't" is wrong, should be don't. There needs to be a space after the end of one sentence and the start of another. The last two sentences are hardly likely to encourage someone to take up reading - "reading can be boring" and "once in a while you might enjoy it."
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