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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Job hopper's life

  1. cloudysky profile image60
    cloudyskyposted 16 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Job hopper's life. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. LouCannon profile image84
      LouCannonposted 16 months ago in reply to this

      Hi -- I am just having a quick look through and a couple things are popping out at me... hope these suggestions work for you!

      1. Over use of same / similar words in a short span
      2. Very long paragraph - could be broken up into two or three smaller ones
      3. I find a small photo close to the top that really captures what your Hub is really about seems to work nicely to help engage readers

      Lou Balmain

      1. cloudysky profile image60
        cloudyskyposted 16 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for the feedback.
        Will definitely use your advice in improving the quality of my hub

        1. LouCannon profile image84
          LouCannonposted 16 months ago in reply to this

          It's got decent bones -- just needs a little bit of added touches... I almost always have to go back and 'pretty' mine up smile

 
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