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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Job hopper's life

  1. cloudysky profile image72
    cloudyskyposted 20 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Job hopper's life. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. LouCannon profile image75
      LouCannonposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      Hi -- I am just having a quick look through and a couple things are popping out at me... hope these suggestions work for you!

      1. Over use of same / similar words in a short span
      2. Very long paragraph - could be broken up into two or three smaller ones
      3. I find a small photo close to the top that really captures what your Hub is really about seems to work nicely to help engage readers

      Lou Balmain

      1. cloudysky profile image72
        cloudyskyposted 19 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks for the feedback.
        Will definitely use your advice in improving the quality of my hub

        1. LouCannon profile image75
          LouCannonposted 19 months agoin reply to this

          It's got decent bones -- just needs a little bit of added touches... I almost always have to go back and 'pretty' mine up smile

 
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