I'd like feedback on my Hub: Travel India :What should you know?

  1. Skian profile image52
    Skianposted 17 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Travel India :What should you know?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image100
    Rupert Taylorposted 17 months ago

    Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but your use of English is just not up to the standard required by HubPages.

    Your first paragraph:

    "India is a land of diversity - diversity in culture ,diversity in lands,diversity in foods.A land of colors that is believed to heal people's mind by its scenic beauty, a beauty that has the power to wake a man who is mourn to death ,a beauty that beholds the arms of everyone and gives them a reason to be happy."

    There are spaces after punctuation where there shouldn't be spaces and no spaces where there should be spaces.

    "a man who is mourn to death" doesn't makes sense. Do you mean "a man who is mourning death"?

    "a beauty that beholds the arms" also doesn't make sense. I don't know what you mean by this.

    Your title should be in headline face - Travel India: What Should you Know?

    The images required accreditation to show you have the right to use them.

    You need to spend some time here   https://hubpageshelp.com/