I'd like feedback on my article: 6 Daily Habits That Destroy Your Hair

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   Imtiaz1 aliposted 3 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: 6 Daily Habits That Destroy Your Hair

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      Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Imtiaz1, I agree with Alicia.                                            In addition, all your sub-headings should be in the APA style of article or magazine writing.                            Also, you must remove all the semi-colon( after each subheads. That word 'recommendation' should be cut off. Thanks.

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         Imtiaz1 aliposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you, sir. Your mentioning tips are really valuable to me.

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            Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

            Imtiaz1, as a follow up, click HELP on your feed page or timeline.                                   That will take you to the learning center. There you can learn the tools of the writing trade. Good success!.

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               Imtiaz1 aliposted 3 years agoin reply to this

               Alright, sir. Thank you so much for your kind reply and support

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                  Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

                  Welcome to HubPages.

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   AliciaCposted 3 years ago

   Hi, Imtiaz. There are multiple problems in your article that you need to fix. The article contains many English errors and the addition of illogical phrases. Some sections sound like spun content. People don't say that vitamins are vital for the soma instead of the body or advise others to increase their intake of foods containing atomic number 30 instead of zinc.
   
   Your references should provide web addresses or links so that people can check them. Mentioning the name of a specific hair doctor and their location as a reference sounds like spam.
   
   The photos should have sources so that people can see that they are used legally. In addition, the title should reflect the fact that the article contains nutritional information as well as a description of six daily habits. You should provide authoritative references for the nutritional information in your article. General references such as the ones that you've given aren't good enough.

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      Imtiaz1 aliposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much, Alicia. For your valuable suggestions and kind reply, know I have got the idea to removed these factors from my content.

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