I'd like feedback on my Hub: Talismans & Amulets

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  1. Rupert Taylor profile image77
    Rupert Taylorposted 8 years ago

    There is an overuse of boldface. It should be reserved for titles and sub-heads. Your sub-head should be in Title Face.

    "You can see them in different forms, such as gems, statues, coins, drawings, pedants, rings, plants, animals, etc" I think you mean pendants?

    Images must be properly credited and must be legal to use. And yes, the piece is too short.

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    1. leaf erikson profile image60
      leaf eriksonposted 8 years ago

      Amulets are a hot look now but maybe you could link to more options for men's style.  The one you found on Amazon looks like it's for old ladies only.

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      1. Akwasi Maru profile image68
        Akwasi Maruposted 8 years ago

        Ii can't figure out what's wrong with mine as well, I've been going back and forth my Hub is http://hubpages.com/business/New-Fire-S … p-Theories

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        1. theraggededge profile image82
          theraggededgeposted 8 years agoin reply to this

          Start your own thread, Akwasi. Please don't hijack someone else's. It gets confusing.

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          1. Akwasi Maru profile image68
            Akwasi Maruposted 8 years agoin reply to this

            Sorry I'm new to this. Thanks for the tip!

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      2. Sam Dreiberg profile image60
        Sam Dreibergposted 8 years ago

        Hi Joanna,

        I could see that you have included few images as well which is a plus. But HP also has a image to words ratio. And you content is quite less in that respect.
        Also, the layout is a little confusing. You may want to increase the text and align 1 image with 1 text capsule.

        Good luck to you. Keep writing.

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