I'd like feedback on my Hub: How To Become A Certified Medical Records And Healt

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  1. onaolapo1 profile image67
    onaolapo1posted 21 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub How To Become A Certified Medical Records And Health Information Technician Specialist (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Rupert Taylor profile image98
      Rupert Taylorposted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Hi
      Firstly, your headline is way too long. Is anybody going to type that exact string into a search engine? I think not.
      Here's a statement you make that is wide open to challenges: "No other job in the medical field affects more lives than this one." How about oncologists, cardiologists, general practitioners, emergency response workers?
      There are a few grammar errors such as "As a certified medical records, and health information technician specialists," should be specialist, singular.
      Images need to be credited and free of copyright restrictions.

      1. onaolapo1 profile image67
        onaolapo1posted 21 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks for taking the time to read and review my post.

      2. onaolapo1 profile image67
        onaolapo1posted 21 months agoin reply to this

        You only mentioned one.  Any other errors?

  2. Marisa Wright profile image97
    Marisa Wrightposted 21 months ago

    Looking at your profile, you're writing a lot about SEO and how to get traffic, so I'm surprised you need to ask us about a Hub!

    Looking at the Hub, I don't think you are an SEO expert because you've made several mistakes, which suggest you're following advice that's at least two years out of date.  Whatever internet guru you've been learning from, you need to find a different one!

    Are you choosing topics based on what you think will make money?  If so, stop.  Again, your choice of subjects tells me you're following outdated advice, because the subjects you're choosing are not money-makers.  For instance, writing about SEO or how to get traffic or any other advice about online writing is a waste of time. There is SO much competition already, those Hubs stand very little chance of getting included in Google's search results, and therefore you have very little chance of earning income from them.

    You'd be much better off writing articles about what you know. You could be very successful writing Hubs offering advice to body builders, for instance.

    1. DrMark1961 profile image97
      DrMark1961posted 21 months agoin reply to this

      Yes, writing about SEO, but definitely not an expert.  Did you look at the the 3 most ignored massive traffic sources. According to the author, the sources are:
      The untapped channels are:

      Social media sites
      Referring sites
      Organic search

      Your comment is great. If people do not write about what they know, all we get is just another article about divorce lawyers in orange county, california.

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 21 months ago

    Because you ask:

    "4.Are you looking for a road to stop out in today's top career process area?" Perhaps, it's me but I have no idea what this sentence means.

    Ditto this sentence:

    "A number of health documents and well-being data people are good in codifying patients' medical information for repayment objectives or purposes."

    And, this one:

    "Aspirants proficient together with computing device program and technology would be delightful to the managers as health - related fixtures keep to take computerized health and wellbeing records."

    These are so verbose that they obscure what it is you are trying to say.

 
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