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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Revelation Chapter Twelve

  1. The0NatureBoy profile image75
    The0NatureBoyposted 10 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Revelation Chapter Twelve (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    Elijah A "NatureBoy" Alexander, Jr.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 10 months ago

    Sorry Elijah but I find your article to be rambling and mostly incoherent. The huge blocks of type, overuse of boldface, and grammar errors won't help it pass Quality Assessment.

    1. FatFreddysCat profile image91
      FatFreddysCatposted 10 months ago in reply to this

      ^^ Yep, what Rupert said.

  3. The0NatureBoy profile image75
    The0NatureBoyposted 10 months ago

    Thanks Rupert and Fat, I'll see about making those changes.

 
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